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Title: Hurry up DAMN IT!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If your going to finish Heading Home then hurry up and finish it! I know that I sound rather pissed right now but I've been waiting for a few MONTHS for you to finish those fics. This one as well as Heading Home. I like both of htese as well as your writing style if not your grammer. In truth that sucks but that really can't be helped because this site screws with it massively. Trust me on that one. I posted one of my fic's under my other account name and it screwed it up so bad. But seriously please hurry wiht the update. I wanna see what connection Rei has to Hiei. And will Kurama get better or will you have Yoko take over and jump Sesshoumaru's HOT body? Just curious. Sorry if I sounded like a bitch at first but I relly like your fics and I am really impatient. Please? Arie Date.
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Title: foxfire101
Reviewed By: tlw On: May 16, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. But pleeeeeeeaaaaase update as soon as you can. I really want to know what happens to K'ramy. Oh one more thing. since this site has no restrictions on what you can write can you please have a chapter where Kurama and Sesshy fet it on or be intimate or something 'cause personally I'm gatting tired of all this kid freindly CRAP on FFN. It's just no fun when you can't use the full extent if your creative genius. (a.k.a. perverted imaginations)
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Title: foxfire101
Reviewed By: tlw On: May 16, 2006 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. But pleeeeeeeaaaaase update as soon as you can. I really want to know what happens to K'ramy. Oh one more thing. since this site has no restrictions on what you can write can you please have a chapter where Kurama and Sesshy fet it on or be intimate or something 'cause personally I'm gatting tired of all this kid freindly CRAP on FFN. It's just no fun when you can't use the full extent if your creative genius. (a.k.a. perverted imaginations)
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Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats okay,just take your time. I can wait for this story. Its really good.
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Title: Hello!!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a new one,I have read. I like the way you begin it,with them going to KoEnma's office and all. The cliff was real good. Im off to read the 2nd chapter. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to fix your spell check. Currently this story isn't very enjoyable do to the fact that the poor spelling and grammar detract from the whole. Fix those two things and I think this could be a good fanfic. That's just from reading the first chapter, also a word of advice if you know your spelling and grammar are bad instead of apologizing for it fix it. The only reason for poor spelling and grammar in a fic is if english is not your first language and even then their are tons of people willing to beta read fics.
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 21:21 CST
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Whatwhatnow
Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I like this story. Especially Sesshomaru going to Kagome's time with Kurama with the fiance excuse, lol. This is great, and I'm interested in finding out who their new enemy is now that Naraku's gone. Please keep up the good work ^^!
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 12:42 CDT
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i loved these chapters. they were so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Passage Of Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Darkyoaifox On: September 28, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story sooo much! Can you please up-date soon? An make some one for Hiei-chan please? Like I said, pleade up-date soon! Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 24, 2005 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Lindsey On: August 21, 2005 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! but i think that there should be a connection with hiei and someome else. also i think that kurama and sesshy should realy be gay in this story.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 19, 2005 20:14 CDT
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i loved this chapter, it was great. please add more to this story soon. you should have kurama tell koenma.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was wonderful! Please update again!!! ^-^
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