| "Tricks of the Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: how evil
Reviewed By: Set-chan On: April 28, 2006 01:33 CDT
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Not very fair. >( Oh well... Just have to wait. Anyways, I'm heavily amused and I like the characters.. they're in character. Keep writing. Set-chan
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:53 CDT
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Hello? Why isn't this story updating? It's cool! ^^ And I like the way it's written,
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Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 04:00 CDT
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hey! love your work! its been a long time since you wrote this chapter, what happend?? anyway hope you'll finish the next chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: Eruionvyrien [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:47 CST
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WAH. Update!! I must have more. It is SOOO good. You write wonderfully. Please continue whenever you can!
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Reviewed By: Eruionvyrien [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:46 CST
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WAH. Update!! I must have more. It is SOOO good. You write wonderfully. Please continue whenever you can!
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Title: AWSOME keepgoin
Reviewed By: Chrissy E E On: March 08, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is very interesting, Please keepgoing, you catch the presence of Kyo very good. OOOOO I cant wait for the lemon. i can only imagine what can happen. great job
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Title: Frustrating
Reviewed By: Eden's Epitaph On: March 07, 2006 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is very colorful. It's actually refreshing to so much vocabulary. The flow is rather well passed although I found myself looking down the page a few times but it was mostly out of curiosity. I haven't read many SDK, however I can tell you did some thinking before writing this and the story line sounds unique (maybe the beginning of a thread?). You should better check your texts though. There are a lot of missing words and doubled ones (like this --> he sighed he again.) Keep your eyes sharp for that, it's a bit frustrating for a reader to make up in their mind for that kind of mistakes (however, I'm not one to talk ^-^()) But what let me down the most was the fact that, once again Shiina Yuya turned out rather helpless even on her own playing ground. I don't mean you shouldn't have done that, and I'm not flamming either. I just think it's sad that no matter what, Yuya gets that helpless image again and again. Wouldn't it be fun for her to kick Kyo's ass just for once? (Thouhg, as I said, haven't read much SDK fanfics... so really, what do I know?) Still... it was that idea that Yuya was finially about to get some sort of revenge over Kyo's attitude. I was a bit disapointed. Another thing that sounded strange was that, for a girl with so much spunk and so much stength of character, to give in so easily... I don't know. I like it when the heroine shows real mind strength that over power the hero. None the less, it was intertaining and I might read the last chapter if I ever stumble upon it. ^-^ (Sorry if you took offence in anything I said. I did not mean to. Here's my e-mail in any case. e_karyta@hotmail.com feel free to use it... though properly please. ^-^)
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: Eliwoodsluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg Kyo is soooooo pissed!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime fangril On: February 05, 2006 06:24 CST
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Shit! That was fucking awsome! I love your descriptions of a character ah especially Kyo-sama kiya! I love it, you're doing great! keep up the brilliant work, can't wait for more ja ne!
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Reviewed By: devil_62 (not logged in) On: September 15, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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I can't wait for the next installment. With the limited number on Samuarai Deeper's on Mediaminer, it's a real pleasure to find that there are some really good ones out there. Just watch out for some spelling errors and is/it things. Awesome work. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Macmac On: August 18, 2005 02:09 CDT
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Great one! Kyo/Yuya, always a favorite. Write more please.
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Reviewed By: Inchan On: August 16, 2005 01:23 CDT
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Hei, you've got a prime article of an opening chapter here. So give us more of the same, please! >.
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Reviewed By: Inchan On: August 16, 2005 01:22 CDT
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Hei, you've got a prime article of an opening chapter here. So give us more of the same, please! >.
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Title: Onegai!!!
Reviewed By: Okita1209 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYY!!!!!!! Please update SOOOOOOOOOOON! It would make this Okita very happy if you would because Okita has been following your story on both AFF.net and here and she would very much like to know what happens next. SOOOO UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: llynnyia kitsune On: August 11, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please more ? yuya and kyo arent my favs but this is added as one your writeing style is alwsome not to descriptive yet just enough so i love it!!!!!! ok iv gushed love ya
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