| "Tricks of the Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: wilted fury On: September 10, 2006 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! This and your other story are two of the best SDK fanfics I have ever read, if not the best. It's very hard to capture the personalities of Kyo and Yuya, especially Kyo, and you do it perfectly. Great job, and please update!
|
Reviewed By: anonymous :D On: September 04, 2006 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NYAH! update please! This is a great fanfic, and I can't wait for the next chapter T_T
|
Reviewed By: Em On: August 12, 2006 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think this story is funny and well writin! i really hope that u finish it, cause i noticed that u havent updated in a while. so please updaete!!
|
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
AW! >__< I say that was mean. You left me hanging =/ But besides that, I liked it, and have read it too many times already. Give me a new chapter, please!
|
Reviewed By: jemme On: June 28, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it...very creative
|
Reviewed By: aneiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good! lol. it's just like kyo to do that. lol. ~aneiko~
|
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Chrissy E E On: May 30, 2006 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... this is amazing. Jus so you know this story is great im intrested in readin the next chapter ^_^ o yeah... this story is officialy 1 years old
|
Title: how evil
Reviewed By: Set-chan On: April 28, 2006 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not very fair. >( Oh well... Just have to wait. Anyways, I'm heavily amused and I like the characters.. they're in character. Keep writing. Set-chan
|
Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello? Why isn't this story updating? It's cool! ^^ And I like the way it's written,
|
Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 04:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey! love your work! its been a long time since you wrote this chapter, what happend?? anyway hope you'll finish the next chapters soon!
|
Reviewed By: Eruionvyrien [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
WAH. Update!! I must have more. It is SOOO good. You write wonderfully. Please continue whenever you can!
|
Reviewed By: Eruionvyrien [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:46 CST
Comment/Review:
WAH. Update!! I must have more. It is SOOO good. You write wonderfully. Please continue whenever you can!
|
Title: AWSOME keepgoin
Reviewed By: Chrissy E E On: March 08, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is very interesting, Please keepgoing, you catch the presence of Kyo very good. OOOOO I cant wait for the lemon. i can only imagine what can happen. great job
|
Title: Frustrating
Reviewed By: Eden's Epitaph On: March 07, 2006 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is very colorful. It's actually refreshing to so much vocabulary. The flow is rather well passed although I found myself looking down the page a few times but it was mostly out of curiosity. I haven't read many SDK, however I can tell you did some thinking before writing this and the story line sounds unique (maybe the beginning of a thread?). You should better check your texts though. There are a lot of missing words and doubled ones (like this --> he sighed he again.) Keep your eyes sharp for that, it's a bit frustrating for a reader to make up in their mind for that kind of mistakes (however, I'm not one to talk ^-^()) But what let me down the most was the fact that, once again Shiina Yuya turned out rather helpless even on her own playing ground. I don't mean you shouldn't have done that, and I'm not flamming either. I just think it's sad that no matter what, Yuya gets that helpless image again and again. Wouldn't it be fun for her to kick Kyo's ass just for once? (Thouhg, as I said, haven't read much SDK fanfics... so really, what do I know?) Still... it was that idea that Yuya was finially about to get some sort of revenge over Kyo's attitude. I was a bit disapointed. Another thing that sounded strange was that, for a girl with so much spunk and so much stength of character, to give in so easily... I don't know. I like it when the heroine shows real mind strength that over power the hero. None the less, it was intertaining and I might read the last chapter if I ever stumble upon it. ^-^ (Sorry if you took offence in anything I said. I did not mean to. Here's my e-mail in any case. e_karyta@hotmail.com feel free to use it... though properly please. ^-^)
|
Title: haha
Reviewed By: Eliwoodsluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg Kyo is soooooo pissed!!!!
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
