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| "GunDread SEED- The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: Hey, we gonna get a pic for this?
Reviewed By: Dreadman On: July 01, 2006 23:38 CDT
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I was wondering, we getting a pic of this? I just dont mean characters...i mean the gundreads! I wanna see a pic of a gundread man! or the I-Freedom! Forgive me being a selfis (selfhes?) ass, but we NEED a pic of the gundams lol
| Title: BWAHAHAHAHAH VERY WELL MADE!
Reviewed By: Dreadman On: July 01, 2006 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SALUTE YOU! Very well made! Looks like you turning into a full-swing harem eh? hehehe.... O boy i cant wait.... anywayyyy,about Kyo's....."bedmate".... Make it Dita or Meia. I mean, Dita is a babe unto herself, and we havent been getting of that lately...and Meia aint bad lookin either. But for the sake of this Fanfic, do NOT have him sleep wit Misty. Thats too,too (forgive spelling error) morally wrong... a 19 (or is it 20?) year old having sex with a 14 year old?...sickining @.@
| Title: Ya...bout that intimate scene again..
Reviewed By: Dreadman On: June 26, 2006 22:10 CDT
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Well...i just want to BEG YOU FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GLOROIUS IN THE GUNDREAD SEED AND VANDREAD UNIVERSER TO NOT have Kyo and misty sleep togather. Also, where has Dita's glompage of teh Kyo's been?!?! I mean, COMEON! I say, let poor little Dita have sex with Kyo first, and if not that, then make-out. He already got to 2nd base with Jura, and by god i say its dita's turn! :P
| Title: My rating
Reviewed By: Dreadman On: June 26, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I gave the style of writing a 10 because in my own view, I think this is a great fanfic! However, you make ALOT of spelling and grammer mistakes, so you should try to review every so often before you post it on the web :D. You got a 9 in originalilty because I have never seen a gundam/vandread fanfic before....hell, i think this is the ONLY gundam/vandread fanic. Enjoyment factor got a 10, because frankly, I wasted ALL of my printer's cartridge printing this stuff *sweat drop* (to examine it, i plan on writing fanfic's myself one day :D) You got a overall rating of 9 because you got two 10s, a 7, and two 9s. Anywayz, about that intimate scene..... I think you should have Dita,Sara,Meia,Mei,Jura, and(but plz dont) Misty, walk into a scene when Kyo is having sex with one of them. For example, have Kyo and Dita have a good time, but, through some freak incident, the rest of the girls find out, causing a Techi Muyo kind of incident! Imagine, Megale girls gettin pissed at each other for having sex wit the Ultimate Coordinator! :P
| Reviewed By: $3ecs On: June 08, 2006 22:36 CDT
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Frekin awsome. I love this. I wonder how this love triangle is going to turn out. And the battle sounds like it is going to be frekin awsome. I can't help but wonder, if someone is going to die in the next chapter, someone improtantto the story. I can't wait. Kudos.
| Reviewed By: Godzilla2 On: May 29, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a freakin awsome fanfic. The best crossover anime I have ever read. I totaly look foward to getting the newest update, I ope i will be soon, but considering how long each chapter is, it might take some time. But it is worth it in my opinion, just don't take a year to do it though. Most fan fics are short every update, but it takes me, sometimes more than an hour to read one of your chapters. Your fanfic is like witing a book. By means, not just any fanfic. This is defenly a fulfledge ten for me.
| Reviewed By: JumperPrime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:21 CDT
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Looking good so far, however there's a bit of a problem. when they're about to pump more energy into the Lancer Platform to beat the deadline, you refer to Ezra as a "pregnant woman" but she hasn't been pregnant for some time, having given birth to her daughter shortly after Misty came aboard.
| Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello!! i really like your story! da whole idea was a work of a genius!!^-^ hope you update soon and fix da whole romance thing cause i am confuse! o.0 ~~ keep up da good work and update soon!!^-^
| Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: Chichiri MonkMask [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 14:10 CDT
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Hiya I'm still here, still reading and I think your writing just fine. Keep it up! -.-
| Title: Hello love
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 17:42 CST
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Sorry I haven't written in so long... I'm really happy you finally wrote Misty's reasons...They do make sence now that i read them...Congratulations, you're genious...I wouldn't have been able to come up with them,a ndnthey are obvious! about the comission: Haven't forgotten. I just broke a few fingers (2nd and 3rd) -_-;; I was oh-so happily commign out of the car when my dad decided I was done and closed the door on my hand. It's gonna be still a coupel weeks before I can move them freely again. I have your pic hald-sketched but I'm still not satisfied =_= So yeah, I'm still here and still alive, but I can't write much... good luck with life, hun.
| Title: Nani?
Reviewed By: Sonic 1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 08:31 CST
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Why is it that you keep adding to the last part over and over? Can't you make a new part?
| Title: Flames!
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:21 CST
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Just kidding ^_^ I could never flame you, you are just too nice. Sorry i have been so dead lately, my house has been petty crazy lately. I just wanted to inform you that (after satiating my dark urges for Parfet/Duero goodness with an almost-valentine pic) I've started working on the pic you've asked me. the main problem is I don't have good meia references pics (I have them on comp, but my sister is on it 24/7) so if they don't look all that much alike, it's because of that. I also can't get the pose right...just how long is Kyo's hair? So yeah. Might take a coupel weeks, but it's most definetly going to get done. Even might get a good friend of mines to color it (she colors like the GODS) but that will take a loong time (she is a doctor on her secodn year...very little time) ps: keep it going! Come on beam, reach Kyo! ps2: I think you need to give Kyo a little more interaction with Misty. i don't personally like her, but if you plan on having her vbeing part of the harem, it would be a good idea to have them itneract a little more, don't you think?
| Title: A Favor for Chi
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 04:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! I haven't read much of your work, and none of this paticular story, but my bro, Chi, wanted me to read your teaser and give you a review since I DO write the romance stuff. ^_^ I read it. It's a good PG-13. Nothing you really have to put a large warning on. It's mildly descriptive and nicely written. The fadeout is an almost classic way to get around having to write a romantic encounter in detail. I liked it. ^_^ I also liked the way you had Meia come up to him. I have listened to Chi talk about your story and admit that I should probably read the whole thing so I know better where this story has been and is going. As for the teaser, I think it's a good start. If you want to do something more descriptive and need advice, ask. There are plenty of hentai writers on MediaMiner, including me. ^_~ If not, the fadeouts will still be classy. You'll just have to make sure the rest of the scenes are well described. I hope to find the time to read the rest of this story soon. Keep it up! ^_~ NekuYasha
| Title: Woah
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 23:11 CST
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Things are gettign aweeeesome..... I bought a magazine with better pics of Kyo's father, so i don't think drawign him woud be a problem, I'm just going to have to ask you to be patient...Mt parents came back from their vacations and I havent had much time to put into drawings, not to mention my birthday is this sunday, so I'm gonna be pretty busy. But I think I'll manage, if you can handle waitign a little ^^;;
| Title: I apologize -.-'
Reviewed By: Chichiri MonkMask [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 04:38 CST
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1st off in response to your reply comment ,should you use teaser chapter to express/gather & test ideas is completly up to you. I read the starting announcement of your teaser chapter and thought it sounded like you might be feeling rushed so I havn't read any farther yet. Since my comment was the most recent when you posted it ,I thought I may have been the one to rush you.(sorry if I did) In my last comment I said "Can't wait" ,I didn't mean that so let me modify that into "I like your story and want to read more." I just wanted to apologize before I read on. Now I know full-well that fics take time ,my sister writes a good deal and I've seen her rushed so thats why I wanted to apologize. so ,loyaly awaiting more Chi -.-
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