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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 08:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty hot. And this is coming from a yaoi author. I like this fic and hope you update soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bane On: June 03, 2005 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing has been very successfull in depicting Heero's confusion and circumstances. I can clearly picture each scene in my mind. I didn't know if I'd like this or not, given the OFC pairing, but I can honestly say you've won me over. Looking forward to another chapter.
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Reviewed By: shattered dreams (can't be bothered to sign in) On: June 03, 2005 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I can't get enough of those life-after-the-war fics and this seems to capture the feelings of Heero very well. Your characters seem so 3D.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Update soon! I gave you all tens because I can't really critique on people's spelling and grammar. I can't spell either. Update!
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