| "(MOVED) An Unforgettable Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: psychotic_gun_wielding_bizatch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 00:17 CDT
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basically i just wanted to say this fic is great and i basically can't wait for the next chapter basically...(lol sry i just finished listening to George Lopez...what can i say ^-^...) newayz i just hope you update soon! i'll see you not right now, right now but later, later ^^
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Title: Some Constructive Critisium
Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 19:07 CDT
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Okay, your story is good but there is one thing that bugged me in the last chapter. When you introduced INuyasha feeling unworthy of himself you introduced it in to early, maybee you should talk about it later when he is actually in love with Kagome. Instead you could have just have Inuyasha complain to himslef of how much a b**h Kagome is (I know she's not but Inuaysha still thinks that now). Just some cronstructive critisuim. Anyhow I do like your story and I look foward to updates.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 17:03 CDT
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I love it. Getting better and better, but chapters are so short.... ;-)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT On: June 20, 2005 15:54 CDT
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I'm loving this story please update as soon as you can because I have three words to describe this story and they are FAB - U - and LOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=p
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Reviewed By: Crumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Keh. I like Ramen." What a great way to let someone get to know you! I cracked a laugh on that one. This is a very interesting story so far, I hope you continue to update and let us get to know the gang better. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT On: June 17, 2005 16:09 CDT
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This story ish sooooooooo cool PLEASE update as SOON as you can please,please,please!!!!!!!!!!!=)!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very well done thus far. i enjoy the characters you have put together and their interactions are nothing short of halarious. very well done. the kagome yash side and his pet name of bitch is well done as well. got to say, you have my interest peaked with Naraku luring them all together. i'm interested to see what you do with this. keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so it's starting out really good! Keep up the good work can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Love it so far!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 14, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really hope you add more chapters -this one has LOTS of potential!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it. Very creative.
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is good and funny. I can't wait till you put the next chapter in. So hurry up I can't wait. Please!
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: June 07, 2005 23:08 CDT
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man this looks interseting i hope that it is what i expect it to be....update this one soon
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Reviewed By: chibi_ahou On: June 05, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u suck you know that! lol just when it was getting good! YOU BETTER UPDATE! lol
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Reviewed By: Inu_Lover24 On: June 04, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is GREAT!!!!!! i luv how u made the gang meet up. plz update!! ill b waiting!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it I have never heard of a plot like that. keep going.
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