Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my.it's a nice story plot but you have hideous spacing.have you ever written before?anyways,if you haven't,you should probably start spacing between paragraphs when people are speaking and stuff.or you could get a beta.works either way.well,tata!!
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