Reviewed By: soulful_sin On: May 31, 2005 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I like the rating system here, but character limit? Ew. At any rate, good story, but too short! Ye gods, girl, this is why my one-shots are at least 1,700 words. How can you get the flavor for characters in 100 words? Since I'm rambling, I'll shut up soon or when my character limit runs out. I like your similes/metaphors and their depth. Even though your story is *too* short, you *do* put thought in it. Good job...and I'll keep myself from adding 'short' again. Oops, too late. ;) soulful_sin
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