| "Practical Joke" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:11 CDT
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ooo must update soon!
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh my fucking god that was some funny shit! please keep writing and update soon!
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Title: practical joke
Reviewed By: ello_girl On: June 01, 2005 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi jus here 2 tell u i love ur fic write more plz!!!
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Title: ah..
Reviewed By: Daria.K On: June 01, 2005 07:39 CDT
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that was really nice.. are you gonna continue writing?
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:25 CDT
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I laughed, I cried, I enjoyed... and I also got confused. I just wanted to let you know that when you have Kagome thinking in the same paragraph as Inuyasha speaks, it can get confusing. I didn't thinks so myself until I read your fic. People who have read mine told me the same thing, and they were right. Also, try adding some more descriptions to your fic. When I did that, people enjoyed it more. This story is so cute, and I really hope you continue it.
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