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| "Memories of You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 10:46 CDT
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So good. Depressing, but good. And thanks for leaving it open-ended enough I can 'write' my own happy ending. Can't believe before today I hadn't reviewed any of your wonderful stories! (attempt 2, sigh, invalid spam code...)
| Reviewed By: Heta Noitio On: June 08, 2005 12:37 CDT
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First: I almost had a heartattack when I thought this was a one-shot. Thank God I noted "chapter one" over there. I would have died if this was not going to continue. I like the feeling of this chapter, it really is "nighty". And how Yoji discovers his memory's memory piece by piece... It's fascinating, really. (I found myself almost yelling: "Come on, Yoji, you can do it! Remember, Aya. A-Y-A. Your (propably) ex-lover!" Geez. *grins* But Yoji himself... He has grown up. I mean the end of this chapter. That he is willing - he wants - to live a happy (and in my honest opinion, a boring) life with his happy little wife Asuka. But hopefully that's not going to happen. So, continue as soon as you can. Please? ^.^ (My eyes almost popped out of their sockets in the sword-scene. It was cool. *lol* I just couldn't help myself.)
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Reviewed By: Happeh! On: June 02, 2005 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds really promising. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I'm checking my email as we speak. I love how you have introduced us to an amnesiac Yohji. When he gets his entire memory I'm imagining pure chaos. I've actually never read a story introduced this way. I can't wait for the follow up.
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