| "Orobouros" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 17:16 CST
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*applaude!* :D
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Reviewed By: sesshyluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very beautufl and deep. I loved how you kept us inthralled with the changes of veiws. Beautiful and one of the best one-shots I've ever read
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Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories. And I don't think I've ever tried a KagomeNaraku before. You're my first one and you did the pairing proud, as you give all alternate pairings proud. Although, I'll never read a SesshoumaruKagura pairing so I regret that I'll never read yours. *bows deeply* Oh, and although it might be rude of me to ask, I was wondering if you'd finish posting "Tales from the House of the Moon" on "A Single Spark"? It might be rude to ask so, I'm sorry if it is. Thank you for sharing your mind with me and the others like me who love fanfictions. *bows again*
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Reviewed By: nicole_wolf_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 23:33 CST
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Interesting. I like the timelessness of this, the futility both of them feel. It makes a lot of things seem more poignant and sad in IY. I also like that you didn't name them instead focussing on the endless cycle of birth, death & rebirth. I wish that the section on Kagome were a bit longer, though. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 00:06 CST
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I like alternative pairings, but the KagNar pairing seemed a rather small part of this story, so I have mixed feelings about it. I would be interested in seeing what you come up with in telling a story about the characters we know as Kagome and Naraku. It's a hard one.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 02:30 CDT
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I like the last one! AWW!
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it at first it makes absolutly nosence then later on it be comes clear to the reader. You rarely see some thing like this any where on any sight I have seen and those that do aren't nearly as good as this, and I have found few profesional books that come close to this. All in all this FanFiction Excedes many of my standards.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:23 CDT
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This is so bittersweet and oddly beautiful. I'm not one who dwells on alternate pairings, but the tragedy in this is so sorrowful and cuts one to the quick. To think of running into someone time and time again, only for Fate to rule that you shall destroy each other. I like the ending.
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