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Reviewed By: too-lazy-to-sign-in mmorg member [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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okay fic. VERY short chapter, though. and, work on the grammar and spelling, dear. update. your fans love this. ganbatte!
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Reviewed By: too-lazy-to-sign-in mmorg member [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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okay fic. VERY short chapter, though. and, work on the grammar ang spelling, dear. update. your fans love this. ganbatte!
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Title: Aw Man! Continue!!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man why did you stop!? This has my interest 100%. I want you to finish it! You have talent, although a suggestion, use commas and periods more often, and spelling and grammar could be better too. But I love it, though!!
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Reviewed By: xoxStArDuStxox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
please update its addictive i read it all today lol......so update soon pretty please......with charries on top....LOTS of them :)
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep going please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 23:18 CDT
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this is a good story. i hope you update soon
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Title: B**** FIGHT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA KAGOME-KIKYO SLAPDOWN!!!!!! No, but really, I love it!!! Inuyasha is hot, Hojo is stupid, and I love what brings Kagome to Inuyasha's bed. I read this fic a while back, but you hadn't updated it in so long that I stopped checking to see if you'd updated yet. I don't think I had an account back then, but if I did, I'm sure it was one of my favorites. Nice storyline. Originality rating's down 'cause there're alot of fics out there about Inuyasha as a lawyer and Kagome working for a magazine, but I think you were one of the first to present the idea. Spelling and Grammar need some work. Chapters are rather short, but if that means you update more often, then more power to ya!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This FIC!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
one word. Nice
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Reviewed By: biglaugher113 On: December 26, 2006 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fanfic. But you just had to keave me in suspense, right. Nah, i'm just messin'. Plz update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 17:27 CST
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i really like this chap. good job. please update soon.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so what can I say... for this fic you had my breath held for such a long time and then you finally posted...YAY! , as for the plot of the last chapter I have a entire bunch of questions but I'll stick to at most 10...okay here goes... 1. Does Kikyo role in this story end here or does she come back to be a physcotic bitch? 2. Would the next chapter be a lemon/lime or both? 3. What's up with Hiten? Is he gay? 4. InuYasha is such a player? Did he learn the tricks of the trade from the one and only, Miroku? 5. Where are Miroku and Sango in this story? (Come on they gotta be included in this mess) Okay... I limited my questions to like 5 so I hope they're answered soon! Great job but I want more! Can't wait for the next update! My hunger is not satiated quite yet...
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*puppy face with the works(you know quivering lip and all)* PLEASE UPDATE AS OFFTEN AS YOU CAN and please dont be one of those people who just abbandon a great story scratch that AWSOME story
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Title: Awesome Fight Comeback!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the recent chapter...no- I LOVE THE RECENT CHAPTER!... it was simply hilariuos and so comforting to know things were coming along and the ease finally taking hold! Rin making Sesshy nervous, or get "TURNED ON"... now that is so hilarious, I couldn't even breathe do to constant laughter. Aww, Kags and Inu are 2gether 4ever...so cute! Kikyo is what really made me laugh. How can anyone have such a huge tough persona and act such like a wimp when faced with her greatest dangers...lolz, "KAGOME LOOSE IT?", now I really want to know how can Kagome loose it and what would she do then? Somehow my mind kept drifting back to the other couple, Miro/San, what happened to them in this story? Doesn't matter though, the story is simply hilarious and funny the way it is now...I really can't wait for the next chapter. How would Kagome pay Inuyasha back for turning him on? What happens when Kagome looses it? What would Rin and Sesshoumaru be doing at his house? *wink, wink* (FINALLY...lolz)What would Hiten say to Kagome's new boyfriend? So much more has to be answered... so update as soon as you can and Great Job!
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Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA HA!!! DAMN STRAIGHT! KICK THAT BITCHES ASS!!! lol. Kick ass job. I loved it. Please update. soon. (puppy dog pout)
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