| "Moving On" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 05:41 CDT
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It is a good story I hope you keep writing more chapter to the story.
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 22:50 CDT
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sugar high! i love it more please
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Reviewed By: Syd Slothy On: June 04, 2005 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY I LUV THIS FIC...... plz keep writin cause its so good!!!! 10000000000000000000/10
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is cute. Hurry up and put the next chapters in.
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: June 04, 2005 00:22 CDT
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Wow not one but two new chaps, and so soon too. This is great please update soon, I have got to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: June 03, 2005 22:36 CDT
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great one!!!keep on the good work! bbbeleana
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 21:26 CDT
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I really think you've got a good story going here, it's notyour usual cheesy stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 20:24 CDT
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LOVE IT SEXY STUFF!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Sango160 On: June 03, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU BETTER KEEP WRITING!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xanith On: June 03, 2005 16:45 CDT
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its very very very good
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Reviewed By: atlfinest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good you need do write a nother one it was like keep asking me to read so more write another and for i't your frist time writing a sex secen it was good it gave ever detail Love yaLL DEVINA
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: June 03, 2005 10:51 CDT
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sounds like it will be a good story, Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Lady X On: June 03, 2005 06:49 CDT
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You should defintly keep this going
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Reviewed By: new fan On: June 03, 2005 04:29 CDT
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This is really good. You should defintly keep this going. I would really like to see what happens.
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