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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Rin and Sess side story it was sweet, I hope to read more of it. I'm sick of Kikyo! Kagome please THROW THAT CHICKENHEAD DOWN A FLIGHT OF STAIRS! A good old fashion catfight is what's needed here! Kagome 2 hits to the body- 1 to the head! The story is great can't wait for more~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. For your first fic this is really good. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
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Title: OOOOOMGGGGG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG 333 On: October 13, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this is your first fanfic then you are good!!! The story line is extent, and easy to follow. The only thing I see wrong is you lack details, but that will Chang as you gain experience... "I'm not a fan of short chapters ,but as long as the updates keep coming on a regular basis I shale hold back the DEMON HOUNDS for now!!! I really like it when KAGOME got mad and took charge of the situation it shows her strength of character and that she's not afraid to stand up for herself!!! Keep up the good work and update soon.... I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a couple of hours before coming home!!!! O;DDOG333
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 22:36 CDT
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That is so not cool, I demand another chapter, well I don't think I can do that exactly since you have to type the next chapter and all that jazz. I love this story, it definitely pulls you in. I Like it. I hope your muse comes to you soon so we can have another chapter. I want to see some more Kinky-hoe bashing. I hate that bitch. I hope you update as soon as possible. Happy writings and a Merry Muse.
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way your story was going so far and I think it's absolutely awesome but it only lacks one thing and that is detail descriptions about the surroundings and other things... I get the mental picture pretty much and Just loving this story so much now! Can't wait for the next update... when was the last time you were here? lolz, Have fun with life and make the next update awesome!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 00:48 CDT
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WHAT!!!! How could you just leave it there!?!?!? I feel like a doggy who's been tossed a bone on a string...omgggggg....sooo good!! Kagome shoulda whupped her ass better, woo woo!!
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Reviewed By: demon godess On: October 09, 2006 00:15 CDT
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hey evil clify. I LOVE IT. U R DOIND SUCH A GREAT JOB. KEEP IT UP.
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Reviewed By: CanineKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good update soon i want to know her answer
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Yeah Kagome, give that b***h what she deserves!! Instead of spit in her face, Kikyo should be sporting a black eye! Spit comes off. Awesome chapter anyway, until next chapter~ B reading U!
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Title: inugrl27
Reviewed By: Lihz On: October 08, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE AND U LEFT IT ON A CLIFFIE!!! dundun dunnnnn lol WELL I HOPE U UP DATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to make them be together! You just have to! I love how shessy is in this. He's so cute and nice. :D *Squeels* I just want to jump him. *coughs* I mean shake his hand warmly..? jk. Great job. I love the idea of the story. It's very good. I like how you write. please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens.-Forsaken faith
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Title: chpt 1 - 20
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn it took me 1 h en 30 mins to read all chpts plz update soon!!!!!!!!! luv ya damn kikyo is SUCK A FUCKIN BITCHY SLUT!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: loopylion On: September 28, 2006 23:58 CDT
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Inuyasha really pisses me off, so he's allowed to have all the sex he wants, but Kagome is supposed to stay on the side like a good little toy while he has his fun?! I do not think so. It would serve him right if she had sex with someone else, hell, I hope she does sleep woth someone, like Kouga. Maybe then he'll come to his senses about Kagome, the little fucker!
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Reviewed By: Koski [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 21:32 CDT
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Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 00:06 CDT
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hey this fic is really good, especially for a first fic. there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but whatever, it doesn't bother me so just keep up the good work
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