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Reviewed By: D. Child On: June 13, 2006 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great but, the sex was like something that is alote like other sex seen i have seen, read, or dun. But i think u should make sex seen more like think that will realy happen, like some of your sex seen that u have dun. And a little fantasy is always good. but over all it was great. PS. get back to me at d_child2000@yahoo.com
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Title: Kittenyoukai
Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 20:43 CDT
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WONDERFUL, TERRIFIC, EXCELLENT chapter my friend. Continue on the progress YOU'RE AWESOME. =3 >From Kittenyoukai
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter A+! Keep it coming!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: lihz On: June 09, 2006 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg gos i want mooooooreeee!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooon plzzzzzz u haaaveeeeeeeeeeeee tooooooooooooooooo pllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooon
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Reviewed By: u know On: June 02, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
like loved it
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Title: inugurl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: June 02, 2006 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome chappie plz update soon and once again tooooooo laaaazzzy to log-in lol JA for now!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: June 02, 2006 09:55 CDT
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AAAAWWWWWW! Poor Kogua I hope he is alright. I'm a Inu and Kag fan forever but I like Kogua too. Please write a new chapter soon.
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Title: O_O"
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! great chapter! IT'S GETTING HOT IN HERE! More, More, More! Keep it coming!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!! i totally love it. u have a great plot. im glad Kaggome told Kinky-hoe i mean kikyou off. i couldnt believe she threw a knife at him. im anxious(sp?) 2 see what happens. ohhh and im asking every1 i review what color i should paint my new room??? do u have any suggetions??? ok well update soon byez.
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Title: omgoshnezzz
Reviewed By: Me On: May 30, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my effin goodnezz this is an awesomenezz story everzzzzzzz write write i'm on the edge of my seat and / or the cliff cliff hangers so evil but i can wait for ur story so i'll be good (hope u don't think i'm a nut case ) i hope this is review 101 that would be awesome anyway byenezz
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Title: Very cool!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be the longest review I have ever written, so bear with me. READY? First off your story is very cool! I like it very much. I just started reading it, took me a couple of hours, but I got to chapter 17. I think that 'My Boo' is a great song Usher and Alicia Keys kill it, and its a good ringtone for Kagome to have to alert her that InuYasha's calling her cellphone. It goes so well with establishing the basis of their relationship, well done. 'Burn' was another good choice too. Kudos 2 U! For your first lemon I thought it had just the right amount of HOTNESS! U go babe! I always thought Rin was high off life or just flowers, sugar, thanks for clearing that up for us. Go get her Sess kami knows you need it! I did picture Rin in a VW Beetle, yellow seems 2 B right up her alley. Izzy sounds just like my own mother she still treats me like her baby, even though I'm 34 with a family of my own. I guess thats what really good moms do huh. Tai reminds me of my dad to. When he found out that me and my husband where having our first he yelled at him like he was a 3 yr old ^_^. Little fights and misunderstandings are great for a relationship the bigger the fight the better the makeup! Kikyo's a bitch have Kagome go getto on her and crack her grill! Ramon's funny good comic relief, that Jamaican accent priceless! Good call on that one! Sean Paul another good call 'Still in Love' is a great way for a guy to get out of the dog house with his woman, and an excellent reminder of way a woman fell for her man in the first place! Damn bat demons ruin everything don't they? Burn'em! I love your story and I'm looking 4ward to your next chapter. HOTNESS!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't say you're chapters are bad I think they're wonderful they're on my favorites lists and I read it every update.
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Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i just got back from a trip so it was nice to see this updated, thanks for the new chap! Uh oh, Inuyasha sounded mad! i guess we'll see how the date goes and if inu beats kouga up afterwards. ok, just wanted to drop in and say how much i really like this story, thanks for sharing. =D
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Reviewed By: lihz On: May 27, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey liked the story plz update soon and im adding you to my fav list im just to tire and lazy to log in so if you get reveiws from inugurl27 or lihz its the same person so plz update soon
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Title: sshyfrk
Reviewed By: inuhakmoon2673 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fanfic hurry and update soon
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