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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe people think that your other stories suck....CUZ THE KICK ASS!!!! LOVE EM ALL keep this one up...just as perfect as ur other ones!:) this is y ur my fav author
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful chapter. poor inuyasha, his heart is breaking. you handled the part with her family so well. love how you brought the lynx youkai into your story, that's a character you just don't usually see in the fic's. kagome wanting to do what she thought inuyasha would do is a great idea on your part. thanks for updating your story. a fantastic chapter as always but, what would one expect from a writer of your talent!
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: kalobagh@mediaminer.org On: June 18, 2005 09:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories!! U must update them all quickly!!!
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 07:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like with all your wonderful Inuyasha fics I've read there is always a happy ending, so I'm not too worried over this problem somehow love will conquer all in the end.
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Title: heeeeeee's baaaaaaack
Reviewed By: Teh Fluffy Beta On: June 18, 2005 02:24 PDT
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BakaYasha is at it already --- falling back on his favorite defense: balme it on Kagome. Oh dog boy.... ::shakes head:: The family reactions were so, so in character, lol, I know not what else to say! That's exactly what I picture Mrs. Higurashi doing in this situation, and maybe crying when no one is around to see her calm break. Jii-chan going upstairs in his room to cry so no one would see, but he still cried (and wrenched some tears outta me!) and poor Souta! No one even wants to tell him. I wonder how long Yasha will resist the call of Kagome's bed since her scent just permeates....well, everything in the room... beautifully done =)
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 18, 2005 01:49 PDT
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::sniffles:: saaaaad! Gah and I thought I got to be done crying over fics for the night! heh, though it's a good thing to cry over fics ;) Kagome's family's reactions to her not coming back was absolutely heart breaking. I just love the whole idea behind this story...a wish gone awry, it's so heartbreaking, and yeah I'm rambling now! Yay for great chapters!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 23:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Do we get to see Inuyasha cry at some point? Or can we assume he already as? If anything should ever break his dry-eyed resolve it should be this.
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Title: left us high and dry
Reviewed By: NotWho_I_normalyAm On: June 17, 2005 23:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the concept of this one has to be THE MOST original in the entire fandom, and I guess it was nice to have to wait for an update for once, it was like the story was marinating in the back of my mind or something. I hope to read more soon, but I guess I would also like to read more of that other one, you know the one about the Purity Kids and stuff...till the next time I feel motivated enough to review (they should have spellcheck on the things so I don't look like an idiot)
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 17, 2005 22:44 PDT
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Another great chapter for Desideratum! I especially like Inuyasha on the first part, I think you wrote that exceptionally well. I loved the whole thing though, and I was completely stiked to see a new chappie. I like the "I write for mw, I post for you' comment, right on! Thanks for posting for us Sue, we really do appiciate it. And just so you know, I think your original stuff is brilliant too :) .
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (in a hurry) On: June 17, 2005 22:19 PDT
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*sniff* I feel sorry for everyone. I didn't want to write a bunch of sentances saying 'poor Yash; poor Kags; poor Mrs. H; poor Souta' kinda thing so that sums it up nicely. I'm sad but really anxious and excited to find out all abut how this new story is going to go. It's like I'm being pulled along by two people in different directions. Ow. Atleast all of my patience always pays off with you. Always.
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Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 22:12 PDT
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Now I'm all teary-eyed. No one, and I mean No One writes angst like you. I don't know how someone can even recover sometimes its so thick. It's amazing. I love rollercoasters, and if it's only a virtual one, I'll take my thrills wherever I can! -- Poor puppy...I just want to huggle the stuffing out of him...guess I'll just have to settle for my plushie instead. Jichan crying...hidoi.
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Reviewed By: LunarAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 21:21 PDT
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I love the way you write Mrs. Higurashi. You make her such a compassionate, selfless person. I don't know about the manga, but the anime doesn't really go too in-depth on her character, and that's exactly how I'd imagine her. Thanks for updating, I'm loving the story so far.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 21:05 PDT
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Oh...how many more tears must I shed? But I think crying in someone's fanfic is a good thing...I've cried in all your fanfics because I can actually see this stuff happening (great imagination) and I love it when an author can move me into tears, just as much in laughter....like in Purity 4 I was busting up when Toga cut the strings of Kich's hakama...COMEDY! And people who don't love your stories, well, somethings wrong with them; I've told friends about your stories and they love hearing about them...so the people who can't appreciate your stories don't know what awesome writting is...they should look at some of the authors on animespiral and see who they like better...I'll bet 100% they'd like you WAY better! And I'm glad that you post for us because I love to hear about what goes on in that mighty-of-wonderful-story-twists mind of yours!
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Title: First real chapter :D
Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: June 17, 2005 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAKKKK NOOOO where did he goooo WHAAAA I'm crying now...You have the greatest ability to make me cry LOL I love your stories and this one is great too.
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 20:19 PDT
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Wow....you are the master of emotions. The poor Higurashi family is in shambles...with a confused and devestated hanyou to boot. Thank god Mrs. Higurashi is a patient woman, I have a feeling she's gonna need every ounce of it dealing with InuYasha. I am interested to see just how Grandpa and Yasha will interact without Kagome around..... This is going to test your 'mad skillz'...How will you do relationship development when they can't be together??? I, for one can't wait!! Another wonderful chapter by a brilliant author. Keep up the unbelievable angst...and continue torturing your characters. It's turning out beautiful! Love, your REAL #1 fan Hentai Beta #1
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