| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Title: The angst!!!!
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:24 PDT
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It took me a whole twelve hours to recover from the shock, before I could write this review. Okay, so it wasn't bad enough you had to pull on the heartstrings with the prologue. Then you go and make me cry first when they pass around the jewel, again when Midoriko talks to Sango, Miroku, and Shippou, and just when I think it's okay to smile when reading Yasha's antics, you go and have Midoriko talk to Kagome, and make my favorite baka go away *sniffles* *tackleglomps* I love it when you pull me into a story like this. I am so excited that you've decided to post another story after the purity's, even more so because you've decided to post this particular fic. Just the first two installments are absolutely amazing. I eagerly await the posting of the next. I hope that the posting of this fic is a sign that you've once again found a measure of the happiness you used to find in writing. You are so brave and forgiving, I really admire and appreciate that. I know that it is because of all your wonderful attributes you can write such inspiring, touching tales. Thank you again for sharing your gift. ~frankie~
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 13:36 PDT
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Where did he go, Sue? You just made the title character disappear. Oh, you Queen of Cliffhangers, you! As usual, I'll be waiting for your next chapter! Please, tell me they find him again! This is going to be a great story! I can feel it in my 206 bones! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 (nsi) On: June 05, 2005 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god.... so intense. I love the story so far. I hope it's not a sad ending! Ahh! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 05, 2005 12:36 PDT
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Yaarg! What a harsh cliffie! I trust your writing and have faith that everything will work out, but geeze! I'm having a heart attack here. Thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stand in awe of your writing skills. The way you write makes you feel the characters emotions, poor Kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter, waiting has never been one my strong points any way.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, you had me in tears! That was so sad, I am curious as to what happened and where Inuyasha has gone, but I'm not going to guess out loud-'cause you always come up with the best suspense. lol I am hocked. I can't wait to find out and what will happen. Looking forward to reading more next update!
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Reviewed By: Yuzuki Potter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've come out of the shadows to review this time Sueric-san ^_^ This story is amazing! It's shaping up to be another one of Sueric-san's masterpieces! That was very unexpected! Inuyasha just...went poof ne? Poor Kagome-chan. Well, things must get worse before they can get better ne? Perhaps the reviewer Pioden has caught on to something...could it be that to balance the flow of time, one of them must remain in Sengoku Jidai and one must remain in the future? Ah ah, I'm getting ahead of myself ^_^" Once again, good work. I look forward to the twists and turns this story holds. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Morly On: June 05, 2005 09:25 PDT
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oh my, I so want to cry. I can't believe they had conflicting wishes. Kags should have wished to be where Inu was. (tear stains)
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Reviewed By: kamackie(nsi) On: June 05, 2005 07:38 PDT
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O.o........oh no Wow Sue....I have no words for the chapter but wow......
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 05:48 PDT
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That was so sad that I cried. I love your writing and the vividness of it. I hope that nothing happens to Inuyasha. Where did he go? What'll happen to Kagome? I'll just have to wait for the next chapter right? Oh well... ok.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 05, 2005 03:59 PDT
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Wow. That was really emotional. I nearly cried! How do you effect me so? This chapter was beautifully written, and I'm glad your thinking about posting more, I'm really eager to read if your willing to post. I really think your a brillant writer, and you have so much talent. Its really a treat to read anything from you. So I hope you continue to write and post, I look forward to seeing more of this story!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 05, 2005 00:42 PDT
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O.O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 22:44 PDT
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG WHERE DID INUYASHA GO?!?!? OMG!! thats soo sad!!!! omg why?!? i didnt expect that omg....[lol] ok im ok now but i just thought of sumthing...since kagome is from one time and inuyasha is from another...then both cant be living in the same one right? since kagome chose to live in inuyashas time...omg...
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Reviewed By: MikoTen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Chapter one had me in tears! I love the way you write the characters. So many people write them OOC, but you manage to capture them perfectly. I loved Chronicles, Metamorphosis, and Purity, and yet again, you have captured my attention.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:22 PDT
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Sighs. sighs again. Oh my, what am I supposed to say, just, oh my. Uh, Puffs please? Your torturing us? It is beautiful torture for us, though. Beautiful.
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