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 Reviewed By: Chocolate milk and popcorn  On: June 04, 2005 19:17 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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OMG! You posted it! I am SO excited about this story. I love all of your stories, but your InuYasha/Kagome stories are always absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for taking the time to repost this for your fans. The start is amazing. I have a couple of questions. First, Is there going to be a angsty side story with Miroku and his kazaana? It seems like there is a great set up for this. Second, How much further in the series does this one take place? Thanks for the post. I can't wait for more.
 Title: WEEEE!!!
Reviewed By: amikatomo [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2005 18:26 PDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm SO glad this is back up! I never got to review the first time... sorry! I really love it so far and I have some questions that I'm hoping are vague enough for you to answer. First, will we get to meet another great villian of yours? They are always so well crafted and end up being on my list of 'My Favorite Evil-Doers Ever!' Second, there were so many moments in Chronicles that focused on Sango and Miroku... will Desideratum have much focus on the relationship between those two? You write them beautifully as well. And what's Shippou's role in this story? Lol, you probably won't answer most of those, but I can try ne? Thanks for giving us a second chance!
 Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2005 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hurray! My favorite couple are at it again! I read this at your site, loved it. Can't wait to see what new and wonderful things you come up with for this story. I love the snarl by the way! I can picture him doing it and then mentally wincing and gulping! Oh and the lip wax! That was hilarious with him being grossed out over a little bitty thing like that! Where do you come up with these funny ideas from? I swear I can picture these scenes happening perfectly! Oh well, I'm rambling now, keep up the beautiful work, and I love the stories and pairings!
 Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: I Sniff Pixie Stix  On: June 04, 2005 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You finally posted it on MM, huh? Yay! I read the prologue on your site, and I've been waiting for it to show up again on here! Yay! It's a shame some people are too biased to enjoy your beautiful work, though! From all of your fans out there, though, I can probably say for all that we bow at your feet for your supreme writing skill! Thank you SO much for finally posting, and I can't wait for this and Purity 4 to get finished!
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph(not signed in)  On: June 04, 2005 15:42 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love this! I didn't get a chance to read this before now, But it definatly lives up to any expectations I may have formed for an author like you. Long Live Cannon Pairings!
 Reviewed By: EAP  On: June 04, 2005 15:30 PDT
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Sue, you really are amazing, and anyone who says different isnt worth bothering with. I am absolutally THRILLED you posted this again (even though I have read the begining like 3 times at your site) I got happy chills reading it again. How can anybody who watches/reads Inuyasha get tired of Inu/Kag? Its like a major thing. Stupid, stupid people. I agree that its your story and you can make them however you want to (please!!! Make them, Sue!), if you want to, of course. I read through the reviews,a nd it loo likes you might have scared them off Sue. Good job, and major Good luck, in everthing you do. *Bookmarks Desideratum*
 Reviewed By: momcitrus too lazy to sign in  On: June 04, 2005 15:26 PDT
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Horray!!!!! I never got to read this, but knew it was written- I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! Thanks a million, Sue
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: June 04, 2005 15:05 PDT
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Yeah! This fiction is back up again! I LOVE I/K pairings so I'm very excited about this story. Thanks for reposting. Any chance you would consider continuing this story on your web site?
 Reviewed By: Inu_Lover24  On: June 04, 2005 14:58 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job!!!!!! i luv it!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!
 Reviewed By: Inuyashin [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2005 14:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for uploading this story again! Every day after coming home the first thing for me to do is turn on the computer and look for your latest updates. I'm so curios to read the next of your really great stories. I really hope you will go on with this one. Despite the fact that I don't rewiev as often as I think I should that thank you so much for all your lovely fics!
 Reviewed By: Sharibet (not logged in)  On: June 04, 2005 11:54 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm really glad you uploaded this again--you manage to capture the cameraderie and tenderness between Inuyasha and Kagome, even when they're arguing. (The mood of this first chapter is very similar to the most recent installment of the manga--"Kind Boy," which shows IY and Kagome bickering a lot, but also a lovely moment when he tries to cheer her up after she flunks a math test by telling her he'll always be there for her.) Also a nice touch with Kagome understanding that Miroku's changed behavior has a deeper cause...anyhow, I do hope you continue with this story, Sue. It's off to a very good start.
 Reviewed By: Kesstral (notsignedin)  On: June 04, 2005 10:40 PDT
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! *cheers and bounces about* Lol, i'd almost forgotten you wrote inuyasha/kagome fics :P and I'm glad to see another... follow this one down the road ^^ Although I'm still kinda wondering.. based on the title... what'll happen? A little bit worried about miroku, though... so who desires/is desired? (are you allowed to tell?) *sigh* and you've been sounding so harried lately in your A/N's when you write them.. is it so bad? I certainly hope not. Well, I'll leave off with commenting on the funny predictability of their arguements. "wench" "dogboy" "bitch" "OSUWARI!!!" *bam* ::laughter from the audience:: ^_^
 Reviewed By: inufan_625  On: June 04, 2005 09:33 PDT
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I know I am not alone in hoping that you do decide to post more of this fic. I love Inu/Kag with Mir/San on the side...And I love all your other fics. It looks like a great start...I can't wait for more.
 Title: I love inu/kag (repeats 502 times)
Reviewed By: yasha 101(not loged in)  On: June 04, 2005 09:30 PDT
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inu & kags make the cutest couple who can object to it beter yet its cannon love the new story -yasha
 Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2005 09:08 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this a start of something wonderful. I really enjoy your writings and can't wait to read more. you have a speicial way with words that make a stort truly magnificent.
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