| "Green Eyed Monster" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse the Dramata On: July 01, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*rolls on floor laughing my ass off* Oh this is WONDERFUL! I love how you've portrayed Mustang and Edward!!!! And the fact that Ed purposely taunted him!!! *goes to next chapter*
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: June 25, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how come u keep updating green eyed monster, but not enemy mine???? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update enemy mine!!!!! *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Tsujita_91(notloggedin) On: June 24, 2005 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Poor Roy... I almost feel bad for him. And I think a jealous Roy is a scary not cute... *shudders* can you imagine the things that would be on fire??? OK, so maybe it's a funny Roy.
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Reviewed By: D.V. On: June 05, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is cool - looks promising! Everyone's well in-character, and the setting and humor is there and comfortably familiar, too. I like how you expanded on Ed's look, updating it, making him a little more sophisticated - the on-going joke about the gropage was very funny, and fit in well, too. I can just see Ed in later chapters still going on, complaining about it, LOL. The scene with the pervy guy in the beginning would be a hilarious bit of fan-art, LOL. Looking forward to reading the rest! Thanks!
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