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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 23:37 CST Comment/Review: Great beginning!!!
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Reviewed By: envious-angel On: September 28, 2005 01:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: When are you going to update? I wanna find out what happens! Please update soon. *gets down on her knees and begs*
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Reviewed By: lilangel On: August 22, 2005 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your fic.Please update soon.I cant wait to see what happens.I have a question, is this fic on any other sites.TTYL
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Reviewed By: waruikittycat On: August 17, 2005 15:29 CDT Comment/Review: It's been a really good fic, but when are Ed and Roy going to get it on?! I wanna see some Fullmetal/Flame action!!!
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Title: forever broken Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 08:00 CDT Comment/Review: ahw how cute.. and cocky. but still good! and when are you going to put ed and roy together?
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Title: Very Nice Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 13:05 CDT Comment/Review: I would have killed Hughes if he had done that t me. But I liked that chapter a whole lot please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:36 CDT Comment/Review: what's gonna happen with the box? I mean there has to be something to do with it since you described it in such detail... when will they just admit it and fuck already?
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: July 25, 2005 05:08 CDT Comment/Review: this was just way to funny! keep up the good work! I so LOVE this story! so when is ed going to screw roy ^_^ whaha sorry anyhooble I still like the story!
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Title: HOT HOT HOT Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 11:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: First of all don't be insulted if you don't like my ratings first thkng I'm not gay I'm also a chick and I have read plenty of love scense before and this was just as good as any of them. I also think that it has a very pro writen style. I like it very much
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Reviewed By: Kasha the Wind Sorceress On: July 11, 2005 12:23 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This has got to be the most funniest story I have ever read! What does the maid outfit look like you got to give us the juicy details after all Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse the Dramata On: July 01, 2005 22:52 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: OH MY GOD!!!! *can't stop laughing* A Maid outfit?!?! *ROFLMAO* WHERE'S THE TENTH CHAPTER?! It's sooooo torturous reading this and having to stop because of lack of chapters!!! By the way, love your story.
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse the Dramata On: July 01, 2005 22:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: *rolls on floor laughing my ass off* Oh this is WONDERFUL! I love how you've portrayed Mustang and Edward!!!! And the fact that Ed purposely taunted him!!! *goes to next chapter*
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: June 25, 2005 18:58 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: how come u keep updating green eyed monster, but not enemy mine???? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update enemy mine!!!!! *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Tsujita_91(notloggedin) On: June 24, 2005 01:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it!!! Poor Roy... I almost feel bad for him. And I think a jealous Roy is a scary not cute... *shudders* can you imagine the things that would be on fire??? OK, so maybe it's a funny Roy.
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Reviewed By: D.V. On: June 05, 2005 20:04 CDT Comment/Review: This is cool - looks promising! Everyone's well in-character, and the setting and humor is there and comfortably familiar, too. I like how you expanded on Ed's look, updating it, making him a little more sophisticated - the on-going joke about the gropage was very funny, and fit in well, too. I can just see Ed in later chapters still going on, complaining about it, LOL. The scene with the pervy guy in the beginning would be a hilarious bit of fan-art, LOL. Looking forward to reading the rest! Thanks!
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