| "Nine Months" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! It was getting so good , why why why! *lol* PLeas update very very Soon please thank you. I can't wait to see what happens once he finds out!! *LOL*
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was FUNNY!LOL!Ims till laughing. Update soon. I realy like this story. UPdate soon!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: June 25, 2005 14:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
Will be more soon? It's interesting.
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Reviewed By: kiara703 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 15:58 EDT
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oh my. wonder when she'll the proud to be father. would be funny to know what hiei's reaction is gonna be. please update soon.....
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Reviewed By: beachbum334 On: June 17, 2005 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: setoshi On: June 17, 2005 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing so far your style is simply captivating do continue!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great first chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!! I love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the thought of hiei stripping is hilarious... and delicious. lol. more, please. i love how you ended the first chapter - poignant and heartstopping. UPDATE!
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: sangoness On: June 09, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute. a few errors in grammar but overall is wonderful
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Title: ANGELBABYo8
Reviewed By: ANGELBABYo8 On: June 09, 2005 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD i love this simply love it. you HAVE to continue SOON
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god you have to update please I can't wait to see what you write.
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 18:28 EDT
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The sperm and egg may not even meet for thirty-six hours after sex. So, I think the earliest you could tell is about a week. Maybe a little more like ten days. I thought it was great. Hiei getting drunk on ice cream. That classic!
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Reviewed By: nashkitty On: June 06, 2005 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this little story. It was funny, exciting, and the idea of Kagome and Hiei is adorable. There were very few grammar errors (which I have to say I'm relieved...I'm a grammar Nazi when it comes to writing lol). And the story line is very original. To answer your question about the pregnancy test, the soonest you can use one is three weeks after I believe but even those aren't 100% sure. Anyway, I can't for the next chapter! ^_~
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323(not logged in) On: June 05, 2005 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Please update soon. I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KIAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!Wowo...OMG....ow did you come up with that...your story rocks...better then mine anyway's ... lol....no..really...keep it up and update soon!
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