| "Nine Months" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: July 23, 2005 10:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love this please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyNekoGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon! this is funny lol!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rewnd` On: July 18, 2005 08:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an absolutely great read. i do hope you will continue with this!!
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Reviewed By: sachi28 On: July 17, 2005 22:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
acceptable
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Title: HaHa
Reviewed By: Eternal Kenmei J.M. On: July 17, 2005 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story please update soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: KharmaGurl On: July 16, 2005 03:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
lmfao! I can imagine Hiei doing all that stuff :tried not to but failed: Update soon please?!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! It was getting so good , why why why! *lol* PLeas update very very Soon please thank you. I can't wait to see what happens once he finds out!! *LOL*
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was FUNNY!LOL!Ims till laughing. Update soon. I realy like this story. UPdate soon!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: June 25, 2005 14:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
Will be more soon? It's interesting.
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Reviewed By: kiara703 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 15:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh my. wonder when she'll the proud to be father. would be funny to know what hiei's reaction is gonna be. please update soon.....
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Reviewed By: beachbum334 On: June 17, 2005 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: setoshi On: June 17, 2005 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing so far your style is simply captivating do continue!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great first chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!! I love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the thought of hiei stripping is hilarious... and delicious. lol. more, please. i love how you ended the first chapter - poignant and heartstopping. UPDATE!
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: sangoness On: June 09, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute. a few errors in grammar but overall is wonderful
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