| "The Siren" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: HAHA
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 10:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAAAH finally!!!! HaHa funny chapter, I laughed out loud a couple times....and seeing as how I'm in the school library and not supposed to be even on this kind of site....that was a bad thing to do. But I couldnt help myself ^.^ Update soooon!!
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Reviewed By: AK Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 23:39 PST
Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!! .:. update soon.:. ^.~
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Title: Sorry Sorry
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeez i just read my last review and i sound like a total BITCH. so sorry!!!
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Title: Still waiting!!
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 16:52 PDT
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OMG are you gonna wait another 2 months to update?!?!?!?! Come on!!!
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Title: ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Awesome so FUCKING Awesome!!!! That's all my mind can come up with right now, I can't wait till the next chapter!!! You better update SOON!!!! Oh by the way, I am so hooked on Nightwish now!! lol
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Reviewed By: DragonChic On: September 30, 2005 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great please Update soon
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 20:36 PDT
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I absolutely love your story, and I'm sorry I've never reviewed before. I know how it feels though because I don't really get that many reviews. I love the songs. Did you write the ones Kagome sings, or did you find them somewhere, because I've never heard them before. I love how your story is so centered on music. It's worth it to wait for updates so I won't bug you about updating soon. (mostly because I take such a long time to update)Bye for now.
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Reviewed By: Tianna On: July 25, 2005 04:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really like how u made the chapters really long that was great. I'm really enjoying the story I hope u update soon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: July 11, 2005 01:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is great, I really hope you'll update soon. Are the songs from actual bands or have you written most of the lyrics?
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: July 09, 2005 11:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love when authors actually know what they're writing about. There have been so many stories that I've come across that involve Kagome as a singer or dancer but they nevert back anything up they just go, she sung, she danced. You are obviously very involved in the musical world so I thank you so much hun for that lil imput! Stories rock when they make sense. LOl Did that even make sense? God, I sound like my 5th grade reading teacher...Ayways! I love how you kept Inuyasha very Inuyasha. In the 2nd chapter I was a bot afraid that it'd be all that love at first sight stuff and he'd fall for her right off and go all gaga over her. It's sweet and all but Kag/Inu are sometimes a tough love--true and too it's finest but tough ^~ And you gotta love Kagome in this story. She doesn't back down so easily and who can't love a girl who can pull some fight moves on Koga? Hehehe! So funny! Also, I was wondering if you had some ethnic background that tie into this story and if so what is it? You seem to know words that I dont reconize as Japanese and definetly not English! ^^;; Well I adore this piece so keep going! Much love n' luck! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rav3n On: July 08, 2005 19:22 PDT
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i love this story, very interesting. please update asap!!!!
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Reviewed By: daRKNloVELY On: June 16, 2005 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hUURY UP AND WRITE SOME MORE ITS THE SUMMER TIME AND BUY JULY 1 YOU BETTER HAVE A LEAST 1 NEW CHAPTER OR ELES SORRY 4 BEING SO ROUGH ITS JUST THAT I CANT STAND IT WHEN PEOPLE WRITE REALY GOOD STORYS AND THEY JUST LEAVE THEM WITH A CLIFFY TO WRITE AND THEN THEY DONT EVEN FINISH PLEASE DONT BE LIKE THEM AND WRITE THE DAM CHAPTER THANX
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 01:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting your fic to FFARG! It has been a pleasure to read. I only am going to review the first three chapters, as you didn't specify which one you wanted reviewed, and we're only supposed to do one at a time. I'm being bad, and doing three. But that's ok, because I liked reading them. Alright, as far as suggestions for improvement, it could probably use, believe it or not, less detail. I'm a music buff myself, so I understood it all, but even so, I found it tedious to get through much of it, because there was just soooo much detail about ever riff, and every movement. Visuals are excellent, and I found it very humorous, the way you have them reacting to eachother. The scene in the library confused me some, because they got along just fine in the club while she was waitressing, and then suddenly...they were fighting? Granted, you said that she was still holding on to her earlier persona, but...it still doesn't feel quite right. Maybe a few inserts on what is going through each other their heads might help the reader to understand just why they are saying what they are saying. After all, it IS in character for them to bicker, but it felt out of place in the story. I saw very few grammar mistakes, nothing I can specifically point out that is a repeated mistake. Overall, great job! It's an interesting story line so far, and as a final comment: I LOVE the laughing song. I performed it once. It's a blast! That said, thanks again for submitting!! Best of luck!
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you keep this up, it's a good story and I want to know what's going to happen now :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Lover24 On: June 09, 2005 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!!!!! good job! i luv this fic! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!
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