| "River of Crystals" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: vikinchicarie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 03:03 CDT
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wow this story was really good not many people writea storys tha end on a sad notes
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 12:51 CST
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Well, it seems like the story could be very, very good. If I only understood it... *sigh*
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Reviewed By: angel_panther On: November 16, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best story i have ever read just wanted to tell u that i cried so hard at the end
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama On: November 03, 2006 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was such a good fiction!!! it was so sad and romantic at the end where kurama had to take the Tama 2 that kagomes soul created! toatally awsome ending!!!
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Reviewed By: Pinb\ky On: January 06, 2006 08:59 CST
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I really loved the story, It had all the right elemnets for a memorable plot, and I particularly liked your ending,as I believe the endings that are sorrowful and heartbreaking to be the ones that speak to you the most. I would love to know if you are planning to do a follow up on this story, or is this the end of it?
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Title: Happily Ever After...Failed!!!!!
Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 17:41 CST
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I can't beikleve I haven't written a review for you before....I thought I had. Oh well. I love how you ended this sorty. Yes it was totally and completely sad threw out the story, but thats was a good theme. Also...what was Inuyasha's other half anyway? I don't think you've ever mentioned it and it was starting to bug me so I just wanted to ask. Please keep writing stories I can't wait until the next one! Well....I think there is one line that describes this story. Happily ever after...failed.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 12:49 CST
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Why did you rush to end it?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 13:29 CST
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o whoa thats a big jump in years
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 19:49 CST
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I was listening to Sakura Drops by Utada Hikaru while reading chapter 23 and I noticed that it went perfectly with it. I started crying! I suggest that you listen to the song, you'll understand once you do. Anyway, I am glad you updated. Continue onward, do not let life get you down ^_^ Sorry, just...a little random piece of advice. -Tsuki
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Title: river of crystalsss
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 14:16 CST
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aiight, that's good, write more, longer chappies! aiight?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 23:52 CST
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*crying*
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 13:38 CST
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whoa find out the truth!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I ever enjoyed a Inu/YYH fic more than I have this one. Great idea of having Kagome take care of Hiei when he was a child. I look forward to reading more chapters. Keep up the wonderful writing ^__^
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:04 CDT
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cute sence between Shuuichi and Kagome. SO she's going aroung killing Silvers. Heartless Bitch. There isn't alot to begin with.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
impressive! plz continue to update soon ... mayb a little bit longer?? hehehe, sorry, i luv ur story!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 15:26 CDT
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sure he had blood on his claws, But were they their?
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter...please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 01:52 CDT
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GOD STUPID WENCH! LISTEN TO YOUR HEART NOT YOUR EYES!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 15:20 CDT
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Don't believe what you see, believe what you feel in your heart.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update a.s.a.p!!!!
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the hiei/kagome thing in adorable please update soon, I really want to find out what going to happen between the fox and kagome. ^_^
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(nsi) On: September 19, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. so whats gonna happen between kag n kura? i like how u did the hie/kag mom thing that is really cute! hopefully nothing too bad will happen to kagome and we can see more kag n hiei cuteness lol well hope u update soon n good luck. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon!!!!!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Angel De Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the double plot of the past and the future. I can't wait to see why Kagome and Youko hate each other so much. You have a very interesting story going on and I hope you will continue it. Please update soon.
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