| "Once Upon a Chat room..." Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Title: Hey again!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: June 30, 2005 11:32 CDT
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w00t! New chapter, good stuff though it needs to be revised alittle, some spelling mistakes and stuff, nothing big though! Funny stuff between Yasha and Kagome. So now I must know what will happen next between the two and how things will work itself out with Kikyo around. I hope to see your next chapter up sometime soon so I can read it and give ya another review ^.^ Anyways, love the stuff! So until next time, Ja ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far. Sounds a ton like 'A Cinderella Story', which I'm guessing that's what you based it off of. Good ideal I must say. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome. more plewase
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story.
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: June 28, 2005 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
You gotta repair this chapter! I can't understand it. (sob!)
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Reviewed By: glueness On: June 27, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great and everything but is it just me or does the story not fit on the page and doesnt have a scroll thing
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Reviewed By: kaylasan_13 On: June 27, 2005 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story, in fact i love it but this last chapter had the sentences cu off. Could you possibly repost or e-mail it to me? t_v12@hotmail.com
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This stry is really good! please continue it! umm..what else am i supose to say here? well great, good, excellent stroy!^^ one more thing.. is it just my screwed comp or some of the text has been cut?
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 11:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was trying to read the Chapter 3. But it is a little bit cut off in sentences. Can you please repost in or send me on the email daniellabalabolina@hotmail.com
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Title: meow
Reviewed By: strawberry taurus On: June 22, 2005 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,I love your fic already! I saw the movie A Cinderella Story and liked it so if this fic is anything like that I wont mind since I liked the movie, but I must admit this a a cute lil plot ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Ying and Yang Twins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yang:I think you're latest chappie is great! I like it a lot. I hope you keep up the great work!! Ying:It's a good story. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT On: June 21, 2005 13:49 CDT
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i've read alot of stories in mai life and this is soooo great from the scale of 1-10 i'd give you a 9 but i'd give you a 10 if you update as soon as you can because this story is AWSOME!!!!!!!=)!!!!!!!!So update ASAP PLEASE
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just Found this story and Glad SInce all MY OTher FAv Storys are either done with or they stop postin which makes me sad...but it should make u happy and me since it let me find ur new story and i think i am off to read ur other story that u said that u have so ya i hope u keep goin with this story and update soon because its really good and i must have more :P so ya jater 4now
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: June 20, 2005 21:49 CDT
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Hello! New reader. Good story, kinda sad, pretty funny, best of both worlds. Anyways, I can't write to long of a review, I must get some sleep but I hope to see a new chapter up soon, so I will review again when it appears. Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: dvs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 23:35 CDT
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cute. I'll look for updates. thanx.
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