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Title: great story
Reviewed By: RobinMKeegan On: July 12, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is better than any book i've read you should write books
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. You mentioned this was a first effort at trying a continuing fic - you did a good job. The length was perfect for the theme, and your characterizations were very true to the original. Great work!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Please continue writing
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm still enjoying your story. Update as soon as you get home please. Thanks! w_j (aka SoutasSister)
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: KenYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love your story ... it kept me glued to the monitor for quite some time. It is beautifully written! Oh yes, I really look forward to reading more of it ... bye for now!
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Reviewed By: pheonia On: June 18, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it. Great twisting of common elements in inuyasha fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 12:11 CDT
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This is really a great story please continue soon. I added you to my favs so I will know when it is updated. You are doing a great job
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Reviewed By: battousai69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story. The fact that you update on a regular basis is a huge plus too. This story is on my favorites list. Keep up the great writing! I think it sucks you haven't gotten more reviews.
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Title: Lovin' It
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 16, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm lovin' this one. I love all inu/kag fluff -especially the tension (wink) update soon -you're on my faves.
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Reviewed By: Daria_k On: June 14, 2005 07:58 CDT
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Totaly cool!!!!!! I can barely wait to read the rest!
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Title: Nightmares
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 11:55 CDT
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OK, a review, I've read the first 4 chapters of your story, and IOP, it's a great start. It's a little different from the usual Inu/Kag stories out there and that's a very good thing. Kinda refreshing. the story is well thought out and the conversation flows smoothly. I have added it to my fav's list, and look forward to any and all updates.
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Reviewed By: Sealdorie On: June 12, 2005 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't often leave reviews, but I felt this one deserves more than it has gotten. Though the chapters themselves are a bit shorter than most, the story itself is very good. It is well structured, and has very few if any grammar errors. I will certainly be looking foward to seeing more of this story.
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Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:02 CDT
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awwwwww--i love it--it too cute
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 11, 2005 21:06 CDT
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All right, all right, your fussing is justified. I've followed your story from when you posted chapter one and I even cautiously put you in my favorites list so I'd be notified of updates but I didn't review it yet. One never knows how this type of story will go and I've seen authors start out with a good premise and then go down hill from there. However, I can honestly say that I'm losing my caution with your story. You are doing very well in building the plot and moving Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship along -- not too fast and not too slow. Inuyasha seems in character and Kagome is believable too (I was a little questioning of her behavior toward Inuyasha after the dream and during her bath but I'll accept that she was still upset). Soooo, the bottom line is that I like your story and I hope to read another chapter soon. How's that?
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 11, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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taadaaa, im reviewing. lol. im the story, found a couple of places that you kind of repeated yourself, but overall this is pretty good. i look forward to the next chapter.
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