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Reviewed By: crazedreviewer On: August 09, 2005 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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lol,wow, i really like this story! cant wait to see what goes down between Vegeta and Yamcha, muahahahah, REVIEW SOON!!!
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 07, 2005 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wide grin* i liked... lots... lol... for ur first lemon, it was really great!!! it was almost like uve written one b-fore!!! ^_^ thats what i thnk n-e ways... update plz!!! its highly addicting and i dont want to go thru withdrawl!!! *peace*
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good though you loose me at times with the fast pace. ( I gotta check back a few times to get it) Not your fault though. Keep updating, its humorus. P.S. Im Majin_Broli on FF.net
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Reviewed By: DARK KI A.K.A.Lee On: August 04, 2005 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry if my answer wasn't to your liking. i didn't want this to come as a debait. i still don't care to much for G/CC stories. i skim the g/cc parts getting the highlights only. i find K/E more intersing than them. that was one i really didn't thing would happen. i thought the whole krillen liking her was just a crush but, nope. get married. had a child. sorry off subjuct there. now true Vegeta showed no emotion to his future son until he got killed by cell. like that saying' sometimes a person didn't know what he has until it gone.' then he attacked cell. futile but, did. to tell you the truth i didn't like Vegeta at first. until i took physology. i took apart vegeta's attiude and seen things i missed before. little things like sitting apart of the others. total non-trust issues and socal disorders. in anime the writers often give clues to show peoples reason on attitudes and reasons for being the way they are. now when you know what to look for you don't even look for it. he changes as the others stay the same through out. that promotes healing. but, now matter how Vegeta come he stays a tad evil. shallow but, you got to like the bad boy just a little. (and some times a lot ^.^) well enough about that. mean, mean, mean Eighteen. for brother was being a jerk. goku should have ripped his arm off. and let me guess Yamcha was taking adventage of Bulma as she was drunk or unconious, right? never was a Yamcha fan. it's tad of a trait i been finding lately. i'm sure there out |
Title: *teary eyed*
Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: July 24, 2005 19:26 EDT
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ty!!!! im not just a vegeta's ass fan, but all the saiyans' asses r nice!!! (xcept for nappa's... yuckies!!!) *goku grin* the chapter was great!!!! 18 is my fave female char. so it was great to have it start off at her place... (i coulda done w/o killin tho... o well... ^_^) once again, ty for updating, and keep it up!!!! im still reading!!! *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Dark ki A.K.A.LEE On: July 22, 2005 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
why i like V/B? hm? at first when i was watching the show. i figured B and V was a one time thing. and Him and eighteen get together. you know, strong, emotionless, rude to a point. but, oppsites attract you can say. but, stopping to think about it. both Vegeta and Bulma had bad tempters and such. how it all happened is a mystery and i think that's why it's so popular. Vegeta is a favoirte amoung most polls on 'who's your favorite charcher questions. me personilty i broken down Vegeta's levels through phyiscology and socialolgy. i find it most fasnataning. oblivoiusly he was messed up in the years years of his life. i wrote all this down in my story, explaining this in detail. plus i only have 786 letters left and i can't write it down that small and i not going to try. and don't say "it's a show. stop anlazying it." because i can if i want to. so there!" ;P you either love or hate Vegeta and Bulma as a couple. i love them as a couple and some or like 'what? why in the world?" i can't change anyone's mind and i not trying to. you asked, i answered. simple, yes. i guessing other like the bad boy image and some love the white lighted hero. who can never do wrong kind of guy. Vegeta to me is more believeable as a chartcher than most on the show. (some more than others ,lauch, tien, Piccolo and many others that look nothing like humans. but, that is beside the point here. and i love to go into it but i now have only 47 letters left so i better stop here. until later.
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Title: Nastia
Reviewed By: refresh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... a really long chapter. Sweet! Just one question: WHY do you keep torturing poor Goku like that? :D Hope thins will get better for him too! p.s. maybe ill repeat myself, but... this fic rules!
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Title: ^_^ Cool!
Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: July 18, 2005 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great!!!! i dont know the show very well, and what ive seen is... well... ok... but i read this, and really liked it a lot!!!! i would love to read more, so update soon!!! *drools* mmmm... vegeta ass... ack! ^_^() eheheheh...
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Reviewed By: heiresstothethrone On: July 13, 2005 12:20 EDT
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i really am enjoying this fic. totally original and really interesting. i love all the personalities especially radditz and now yamcha steps into the mix. i can't say that I like him and at first i sort of was hoping he had dated chichi or 18 but i wasn't lucky cause here he comes wanting to marry bulma. i never know what she sees in him? so i figure you're just going to make me suffer with all the drama and love triangles. first with bulma vegeta and yamcha then with chichi goku and 17, hmm is 18 going to follow suit and get her own love triangle with radditz and krillin maybe. just wondering. but these were a great few chapters so far. if you don't mind i could really use some pointers on my fics seeing as these are my first published. but great job and ill see you later.
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Reviewed By: Nastia On: July 07, 2005 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice... Dont stop writing, im getting addicted to this! please... ^_^ But may i interfere? could you not describe the clothing so much? thats the only flaw i see here. Everything else is COOL!!!
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Reviewed By: Nastia On: July 07, 2005 06:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice... Dont stop writing, im getting addicted to this! please... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark KI not log-in too lazy right now On: July 01, 2005 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i here i don't even like Goku/chi-chi of any kind. but, this is working for me. i like. that means a lot even if it doesn't sound like it. (take my word for it.) ;)
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Reviewed By: Nakazaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O______O OMG~!! this is sooooooooo goooooooood xD I have totally fallen in love with this fic ^^ Update soon plz~!!!
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 03:41 EDT
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i have totally and utterly fallen in love with this fic! i can't help but love all the characters and i sort of fell sorry for goku since radditz always seems to pop up and spoil everything, but then again it keeps it interesting. i love bulma and vegeta, no holds bar just plain olf knocking boots, just the way i like it ;-) kiddin but really i was initially expecting something to happen between 18 and radditz but i cant help but feel some compassion for lil ol krillen. well i can't wait until you update since ill definately read and review.
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Reviewed By: Jeanna On: June 23, 2005 21:45 EDT
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WOW IM HYPED UP WITH THIS FIC !!! BULMA and Vegeta are so wild and Goku and Chi-chi are just so damn cute .But what about Raddy-kun he has to get something HE CAN GET ME LOL!!!! Poor Krillen damn 18 better not get him fire UPDATE!!!!! MORE B/V LEMONS! LOL LATER
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