| "Breaking the Barriers" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: Breaking the Barriers
Reviewed By: LC On: July 12, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story and u should continue it and update sooner.
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Reviewed By: darkness_of_the_night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, i love ur story so you must wright more LOL anyways please update a.s.a.p!!!!!OH NO THE FOOD well i have to go or my house will catch fire hehe*sweat drops* thats all for now till next time ~jane~
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Title: Ch.2
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: July 08, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the first chapter on ff but the reviews weren't working that day so sorry about not reviewing before. The story is moving along nicely and it is quite good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Inkotoma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you kee writing on this and no you story does not suck like you said in the end I think its coming together quite nicly
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Title: Ready For More!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm into this one alot -update soon!!
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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have on your hands, and i can't wait to see how it turns out! let me just say one thing though, but it's not anything big; you have really great writing, and i didn't see a spelling error in sight, but you get your present and past tenses kinda mixed up. examplewould be the 3 and 4 paragrapgh after the first 0.0. in the 3 paragraph, Sango and Miroku are being introduced into the story as kagome's only friends. in the 4th paragraph it's reafing this "they know her life. they know the secrets that she hides from everyone...". when actually it should be "they knew..." like i said, it's nothing big, but i did have to read over a second time, because i got a bit confused at the change in tenses. other than that, this is going to turn out to be a great story. and don't think of what i said/wrote as criticism, because it's not, it's just friendly advice. update soon!
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Reviewed By: squeeker On: June 12, 2005 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
good good good good good u have to update soon.
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it a good story I hope you keep writing on it I hope you up date so on it
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Reviewed By: Inkotoma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story so far. every thing made scince. unlike some stories I've read it flows together. I hope to read more and would like to be e-mail when you add new chapters. plz!!! at buck44072@bellsouth.net Thanks and keep writing...
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
sounds interesting please continue!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, this might become something good, i'll give a more detailed review once you get a few more chapters out, you've been added to my favourite story list so once you get a few more chapters out, i'll give a more thorough review, until then, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kagome_son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i can tell this is gonna be a great fic, i cant wait for you to write more!!! keep up the great work!! Kagome Yamamoto
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