| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaku On: September 26, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely, wonderfully, EXCELLENT! I enjoy it so much!! Update more soon please
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a good spot to leave another review. This story keeps getting better and better. It would seem that Sesshomaru's plan worked, but who was that other entity? Also, it would seem that Kagome finally realized who it is she is drawn to. I'm hoping she will be accepting of that, or at least have some sort of understanding. What she would really need to do, is to sit down and have a talk with Sesshomaru, at least find out why he though the potion was his only option.
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Reviewed By: Em On: September 26, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter, absolutely brilliatn and well-written. I am quite jealous of your endeavors as I am an aspiring writer who can only hope to write half as well as you. I can't wait to see what unfolds next in this twisted love triange, sort of. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: lori On: September 19, 2005 20:42 CDT
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i luv it please post thanx!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death2 On: September 16, 2005 00:12 CDT
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H-HEY!!! Not a good place to leave a story! Not fair, not fair! Write more, please? Please? Please? Please? Please? It's going to be my birthday soon, the 28th of september, call it a birthday present and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: September 15, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story a few days ago, maybe at a chapter or three a day, and I must say, you have me hooked! I think it's absolutely creative the way you change the views of the story, from third person, to a sort of second person point when you discribe the setting of the characters as if the setting (like a river or what not) had eyes to give account of the character's actions. It's brilliant work, keep it up, and I promise, I'll be back for more. Press on, - kinoko
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lazy2logn) On: September 15, 2005 10:26 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY, but youve got to update and start anwsering the questions! Please!So many questions and no anwsers! Please update soon, and thanks for the dedication, no one has ever done that:). Ill check every day! no pressure!...lol
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Title: Yey!
Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 11:15 CDT
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Yey you updated!! And a good chapter too. I'm sorry for your knee, hope it is better now. And I'm sorry for not reviewing last time. I was going to, but then one of friends called at me and I forgot all about it.*ashamed* But the main reason is YOUR STORY IS THE BEST!!!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 23:14 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Thirsty
Reviewed By: vermillion 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!! I am so glad you've decided to keep updating. As usual you've done a remarkable job. There are real gaps in the story, very fluid in its motion. And the plot itself is intriging enough to hold your attention and see it through to the end. Like a steak dinner date. I am impatiently awaiting further chaps. Though I have to say I am might parched. Got Lemonade? Hope your doing well. My best wishes for your speddy recovery.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:02 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE! I MISS GETTING TO READ THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: koumorihana On: August 31, 2005 19:02 CDT
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Is Inuyasha going to get any nicer to Kagome? It just bothers me so much how you have him treating her. By the way, the story just keeps on getting more and more interesting. Thanks for posting so quickly.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 12:45 CDT
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great story please start some anwsers soon though, plz! Is the secret going to come out now? Is she going to be permanent youkai? Please UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: vengeance_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for a long time in my spare time but never had the time to comment/review. This story is by far the best fiction I have had the privelage of reading. The way you word even the simplest of actions is just fantastic, and the story is so creative and interesting. I can't wait to read more!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 19:11 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters
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