| "Transcending Time" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 24, 2007 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading. I love this. It sucked me in really quick. Can't wait to keep reading!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so lovin' this story right now. YAY! Can't wait till the next update!!!!!
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Title: Inu-Kag Fic Please!!!
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with you; you've got some grammar issues, and it's kind of distracting sometimes. And I agree with InuGrrrl; I'm surprised you had Inuyasha actually injure Kagome. But all for the good of the story, right? I can sense a major inu-induced guilt trip coming on... Good story so far, but may I make a request? [I don't usually make requests, but here it is:] PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't include Sesshomaru in the love triangle with Inuyasha and Kagome!!!!! I'm sorry, but I have an Inuyasha-Kagome fettish, and I'm liable to stop reading if this turns into yet ANOTHER Sess-Kagome fic. Keep writing, though!!!!
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Title: Missed This Update
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update, evil cliffy! I think it's interesting that you allowed InuYasha to strike Kagome. Most people stop short. I like it ^_^
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Title: Oh Yeah!!
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: October 03, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great strat , great story. I love it. Update Soon Please. P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hanyoulover On: October 02, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story please update! ca't wait to see what happens b/t inu & kag!
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Reviewed By: GeeGeorge On: October 01, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm...I'm curious...why is it that they are speaking Japanese in ancient Egypt? If you don't know the language of the Egyptians, then just speak english...don't get me wrong I took a year of Japanese and love the language, but its not really appropriate for a plot taking place in Ancient Egypt... I dont want to sound mean or anything, I liked the story, just pointing out something you MIGHT want to fix...
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: September 30, 2005 04:19 CDT
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you evil person! why did you have to go and leave a cliffy like that? i love the story so far. keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: DarkestDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice story. i like how you twisted the story a bit. Anyway...Please update soon, im glued to it already!!!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 00:35 CDT
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well, i thought that you didn't origanally come up with this, unless it was you who drew those pictures. they are here somewhere on mediaminer. it has Inuyasha and Kagome in acient Egypt times. just to let you know.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: July 22, 2005 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay! an update! hope you update quickly!
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Reviewed By: Ai no kami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:29 CDT
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Snot! I like this fic... It reminds be of a book I read called "Reflections in the Nile" by J Suzanne Frank. Basically about a woman who is born on a cursed day and so she gets thrown back in time from Modern Egypt to Ancient Egypt...You should read it...it's really worth it. Lots of smut too...X3 It even might help you get into the mood to write more on this one! I'll be watching you! -shifty eyes- Eh heh n_n
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Reviewed By: EgyptianKiss(not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. Please update soon. You've got such great details and it's fascinating how well you depict the era. Please, please, please update SOON!
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is strating to get fun. I really hope you update soon, i like your creative angle.
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Reviewed By: Diamond Sun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 00:23 CDT
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Wow, so far, this a really good story. The plot seems very interesting, and even though there have only been two chapters, I'm hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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