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Reviewed By: NIko_Chan On: February 11, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story, my first time reading it. You really should update really often. This story was about the best that I have read. Update again please I just can't wait to see the next chapter and you got to the point where Inuyasha startes to show his true feelings for Kagome. What I really want to know is if Inuyasha is the demon from the legend because he acts like he's not him but you can tell that he is hiding something from her. Hope to read another update really soon can't wait for it. Great on making Kagome doing archaeology because that just makes the story even better to read. I just can't wait to see if the jewel is in Kagome like always. Keep doing a great job on this story and update more pretty please.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:21 CST
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this story is great! i love the teasing, but I'm curious to see how Inuyasha and kagome evolve. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i am so glad that you will be continuing this fic. i hoped that this was an update, but a promise for one is almost as good. lol. btw, i know what inu said in spanish in ch. 4. lmao. the perv!! what guy would stop a girl from doing THAT. i had to ask my husband tho cuz i don't speak spanish. he was like, "what the heck are you reading?" i was like, uhhhh. ^__^ hope to see more from you soon. take care.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 18:37 CST
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I really like this story, and wish for you to continue it, even though I see you haven't in a long time...one can only hope then. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:09 CST
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Grrrrr. Are you ever going to update this fic? I've been waiting since July! Pretty please with cherries and fudge on top update soon?
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Title: Search for the Shikon
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: I had just finished reading the 5 chapters of this wonderful story and was very sad to see that you have not updated since July. I found the story a very interesting read. I have to admit that reading about the histories, archaeology, ancient sites, and alittle treasure hunt mixed in is very original. Not to mention the sexual tension and bantering between Kagome and Inuyasha is very well-written. They are both so in character and older to boot. I am waiting to see how the 'assassin' will be written into the story. I do hope to see more chapters written soon and have added you to my favorite authors list. Take care of you, Christal
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 16:40 CDT
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Wow. All those credetials made me dizzy...I'm really starting to get curious about Inuyasha's behavior towads the story. It makes me think he's hidding something...I love their interaction and their comedic ways! Another lovely chapter--on to the next...eventually....Love ya! ^^
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Title: On the first chapter....for now
Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 21:19 CDT
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*claps* An excellent mix of growing romance and comedy. It's always such a nice change to read the first chapter and not be totally depresssed. Lol. I liked the progression of the chapter and how they were all in each others faces at first before becoming relaxed together. You make them appear very cute, realistic to this world, yet still keep the over all feeling that yes--they are the Inuyasha and Kagome we love. My favorite little things out of the chapter had to be when they were translating each others names--basket case lol; how you flashed back into and from the pictures Kagome was looking at, very creative; and anytime they would tease each other, the sexual tension of "Oh my gawd--just kiss him/her~!" is always fun. You're a brillant writer and I'm sad I'll have to hold back on reading the next two chapters...Thank you for sharing your talent with us~! Love ya~! ((Stupid spam-guard...I've already tried sending this 3 times...O_o))
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Title: I hate waiting
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 20:24 CDT
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I am going to cyber-nettically kick your leg if you don't write more and soon. Just kidding. I can't be that mean. It's against my nature. But I have let out quite a few exasperated groans when I don't see an update on this wonderful story of yours. I've wanted to be an archeologist since third grade, but decided not to take it up because I would mostly have to teach and not work in the field. At least that's what my humanities teacher said last year..... He was an idiot. Anyway. Really good. And please update as soon as possible for you. I know how life gets in the way of things you enjoy. Bye.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 17:44 CDT
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ha ha. unaware, paranoid, hot-headed. yep, thats our inu. this chap was great. i am excited to see what is written inside of kags fathers journal. i wonder what it is inu thinks she's hiding from him. please update when you have the chance. p.s. i can't wait for kag to meet the rest of the gang. =)
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Reviewed By: joseph t. On: July 14, 2005 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story plz update soon it's really interesting.
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Reviewed By: twistedsister On: July 13, 2005 22:51 CDT
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That was so funny,I love it! I'm curious to know something, does Kagome know how to fight? Cause it would be really funny if she could beat Inuyasha in a sparring contest.
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 09:38 CDT
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great story! i love the idea and how you wrote it. But mostly I like your long chapters! Continue! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 22:57 CDT
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luv the banter, luv the banter!! heh heh. i am diggin' this story like you wouldn't believe. i wonder why inu's mood changed so quickly when kag mentioned the old village and its buried scrolls. interesting. hope you had a happy independence day. can't wait 'till the next chapter. ja.
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Reviewed By: IceAngle_of_Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic please update soon! its so original and i love reading a fic where i cant automaticly figure out whats going to happen.
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