| "Shivering Sands" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: Seriously not cool
Reviewed By: Alesia1318 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2017 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The last 2 chapters are the best and then you leave it on that
cliff hanger man this sucks
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Reviewed By: readergirl732 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2011 13:37 PST
Comment/Review:
please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know what will happen. I read this story so often just hoping it will be updated. |
Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 21:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
First and foremost thanks for updating this story...had to go back and reread it since it has been so long and secondly please let Sess get there before his pup is born only to fall to his death...were is Kagome's purification powers??? Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next installment
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 12:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to start from the beginning of this story because it had been so long since the last update. I had forgotten what it was about. It is a good story but I really hope it's not another year before you update again. Regardless, I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 16:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow he's going to have her birth the baby so it falls to it's death. I'm guessing you'll let Sessy get there in time?
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 17:20 PST
Comment/Review:
It would be easier if you made sure to put different people's talking on their own different lines. Like....line one would be "kagome talking" then press return button...."Sesshoumaru talking" you know? Not smushed together in one paragraph..? Just a suggestion.
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Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I fine this fic is going really great so far and i hope you update soon ^_^ please if you get the chance e-mail me so that i can know when and if you do update. And keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,I sure wasnt expecting naraku, I cant wait to see how this story ends.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 15:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awe....bad naraku.....He better not hurt that baby!!!
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Title: Holy s***!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 05:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god, NOOOO!!!!! That totally sucks! But awesome chapter! I'm scared now!!! Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 14:32 PST
Comment/Review:
your story is very good i liked it, it had good detail and was well written, are you going to write more?
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Reviewed By: dimondrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:44 PST
Comment/Review:
i really like your story... i really want to know what happens to Sesshomaru, Kagome and the baby... and i really want to know what is going on with Kikiyo... ooo sometimes i really want to hurt her or something... tikes... anyways! please update!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeah!!!!!! such a great chapter!!!!!! you deserve lots and lots of cookies & maybe a pie! I'll start baking right now!!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 19:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! Great chapter...
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Reviewed By: chicke [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:57 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story can not wait to read the rest
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