| "Millunnium warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: magerm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 14:16 CST
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great! too bad you can only update on weekends, oh well... anyways, update as soon as you can, and for the character poll, i'm not really sure, maybe Zip...
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mini Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 21:54 CST
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(laughs) Mokuba's always so cute. I love it when he has some plan cooked up. Dodgeball. (twitches) That is the most EVIL game in the face of the earth. Add that with the fact that I already dispise PE and you get the most stupid, pointless, evil game of all time. I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story please update soon
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Reviewed By: magerm-not logged On: December 11, 2005 15:02 CST
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you gotta update soon, you have no clue how long i've been waiting for this day to come!"
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mini Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 19:37 CST
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Yeah! You updated! (tosses Kaiba plushie into the air) OH CRAP! (catches Kaiba plushie and cuddles it) I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I promise I'll never do that again... (continues on) (10 minutes later) (done cuddling Kaiba plushie) =^-^= I LOVED this chapter. And the before/after chapter scene things are funny. It's the killer psycho hamster! We're all going to die! (grins) I already like Allison, she sounds cool. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: magerm~not logged On: November 19, 2005 12:38 CST
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UPDATE SOON!!!!! can't wait for more!!! awww, so cute!!!
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Reviewed By: yumi43093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was....uh.....interesting. Keep writing. I want to know if she's gonna die or not. Oooo! If she does, make it really dramatic, and gross, and slimy, and creepy, and sad, and stuff! Sorry. I had a moment.
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Title: Katie_Neko
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your storys really cool. I cant wait for more.! I didnt like Yu-Gi-Oh, but now I do. Your story is so awesome! ^-^ Katies my name sooooo....Kate is my favorite character. :) I give you a golden medal for your story. *gives Kaibafan5 the medal*. Plz write more SOON.!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mini Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:09 CDT
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Another great chapter. The little end-note thingys are funny, though I think Joey's alot cuter than Yami. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: magerm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 18:49 CDT
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You revised! Yeah! That would be easier to understand the story! Yipee! Anyway, I hope you will update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mini Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't believe I forgot to put your story on my favorites! I feel so stupid! (bangs head on desk) Oww... well that was stupid. I love the song you used in chapter three. The capitalization is much better now. (grins) I'd better go work on my fanfics, seeing as how my yami and one of my muses is bugging me about it... Great story!
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Reviewed By: Kaibafan5 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 13:15 CDT
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WOW great story but you are way too obsessed with Kaiba GET OVER IT!!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: magerm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 16:31 CDT
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Hi, it's me, magerm. Thanks for reviewing. And by the way, I LOVE your story!!! Anyway, I had already finish chapter 3,4,and 5. I jus tneed to post it now. I finished ti long before, but my dad wouldn't check it, so I guess I'll just have to di without him. Anyway, keep on going with your story! It's funny, creative, and well, FUN!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mini Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:28 CDT
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Well, you ask for me to review, so here I am. =^-^= I think this first chapter was pretty funny. Your darker half is pretty cool. Unlike mine who's nicknamed after an Egyptian goddess... Anyway, the only think you really need to work on is capitalizing the first letters of the sentences in the quotes, other than that... COOL! *cheesy grin* Can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be waiting! ~Shiro
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