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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! i almost had a heart attack when i read the prologue... it wasn't fair that he died... i like more the second version... great work as always and please update your other fics... i love them all!!!! =)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: redhead06 On: October 13, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have great ideas but u have a lot of mispeled words and misplaced letters, u were also missing some letters in the words. other than that it was awsome! looking 4ward to ur other fanfics!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic wuz kawaii, especially from the whole geek part. I cried when i read the prologue, n when i read the ending too. Then i got angry tears when i found out you put kags n...kouga 2gether! I wuz like...wtf?!?! Then i cried happy tears when my dear Inu didnt die.lol. See how many times your fic had me crying. Dont foget about the Miro n sango parts..those had me crying too. And the sex scene with them? I watched a couple of pictures with the shower part, when the girls pleasure themself with the water. LOL. I luaghed cuz i wuz sure that I'd neva get that in my mind. I daze out for a sec, n put sango in the picture. I jus had to laugh. Your mind is so full of hentai thought. Guess what? I LUV IT. I myself can be like that 2. But seriously, you're really gifted. Your story brings out so much emotions in me that i thought I'd neva show, especially for fanfiction. lol. GREAT JOB, sc...i luv it. Ja...^.^
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Reviewed By: stickpersonkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 01:08 CDT
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This was a really, really good fan fic, the first ending was a real tear jerker which is what some need, without those the others all seem the same. I can honestly say that this is the first one that has made me cry. The alternant ending was really good too, you should keep writting some like that, you have a real nack for it (and I know I'm sounding like and english teacher, gag)
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:10 CDT
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the first ending almost had my crying. When Inuyasha died, i was SO CLOSE to crying...*sniffle* I still am...this is definately going into my favorites ^^;; But I did notice alot of misspellings and grammerical errors.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 00:02 CDT
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This story is so cute
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Reviewed By: mikoofseaanddarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y did u make inu die???? He is 2 special 2 die!!! (snif snif) put the happy b4 the sad!!!!!! I cried when he died!!! y did he have 2 have a car accident?!?!?!??!?!?!? ggggggrrrrrrrrrr...........
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Reviewed By: yashacrazed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant remember reading a fic that made me cry so much. i hate how stories can do that to a person, but i never learn my lesson. anyways... i shall read your other fics, i\\\'m sure they will be just as awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first read this story.....I hated it because of Inuyasha dying right when it opened....but once I had started....I couldn't stop, I had to finish it....even though I'm happy that you made 2 endings....I think you should have stuck with the original....it breaks my heart to say that, but after I was finished, I realized that it didn't matter in the first ending, because she would always have Inuyasha with her, through Ken'ichi, the pray bead necklace thingy (lol)...and in her heart....but thank you....I guess I needed a really good long cry...lol
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Title: kittenchow
Reviewed By: the grace of hatred [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya know.. i think there were alot less tears when reading the second verion rather than reading the first version.. i just loved this sotry.. i started it at about 11:30p.m. and now it about 1:00a.m. i was just like entranced... i loved this story so much!! i just couldnt stop reading it.. oh well it was time well wasted.. considering i have to wake up early tomorrow to clean house before my mom gets on my ass for having a messy house.. anyways loved the story and i cant wait to see more material from your ingenius mind!! have a nice night! or in my case morning!
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have ta say that i lke the version 2 of the story. i usualy don't mind sad endings, but i'm sorry i just really can't see kouga and kagome together. inuyasha is WAY hotter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:24 CDT
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You wrote an alternate ending to your story? I did the same thing with "the divine prison" because no one liked my ending where I killed everyone off. Nice to see someone is thinking like me... or is it? I'm kind of weird. :p James Lucient
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:22 CDT
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This fic would be AWESOME if you would please space between conversations. I keep getting confused, lol. Some of it is sweet, some is hillarious. Sango and Miroku have perfect chemistry! Keep it up! :)
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Title: T_T GREATT_T
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i made the mistake of reading the \\\'wrong ending\\\' first and OMG I CRIRD than i read the \\\'better ending\\\' and i am i little better now ^_^ and again this was a very good story thnax for writting it *both of them^_^* bye Dark_Lady_69
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Title: T_T HE'S ALIVE T_T
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe u would write a whold new ending just for me. the first ending made me cry ^__^than i read this other one and now i all happy^__^ i have never had an author do this and i guess all i can really say is KWEL!_!^_^ cant wait to read more of ur stuff PS if u ever get the chance to read my stuff tell me what u think
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