| "A Raven Like No Other" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Don't Stop
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 13:57 CST
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I just stumbled across your story today, and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. You have a great imagination and a real attention for details. To be fair, your writing style is a little weak (spelling and grammar especially), but the plots and character development are more than a counterbalance. Plus the last two chapters were very HOT. I hope that you will come back to the story in the near future, but if not, thanks for the memories!
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Title: A shame really
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 05:38 CDT
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Well I just checked and you have no other works. It's a shame really cause you are fairly talented.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 05:37 CDT
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Well there are several spelling errors and a few grmatical errors. But on the whole it was still highly enjoyable. I usually only read YYH and INU fanfics but I decided to explore things a bit. I am very pleased with this fic. Keep up the good. Maybe I'll look for more works by you
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Reviewed By: Mr. T On: October 03, 2005 17:26 CDT
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Another well-written lemon scene. I have to wonder, with all the unprotected sex that Raven and Beast Boy are having... could they end up with a little 'surprise' soon? Anyways, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Frimmy On: October 02, 2005 19:04 CDT
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you haven't forgotten about this story!!!! i love it so much, it has so much potential!!!! i would really love for you to continue it, can you please please PLEASE continue!!! *begs in four different languages* you left such an evil cliffy!!!!1 *cries* Frimmy
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Reviewed By: Mr. T On: September 28, 2005 13:57 CDT
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Great job on the lemon chapter. It was written very well. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Frimmy On: September 20, 2005 12:29 CDT
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GAaaaaaaaaaaaHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! it's been so long... me loves your story is so good, you can't just let it end there!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mr. T On: September 10, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Excellent Chapter. So Raven's finally defeated Rage... wonder what'll happen between her and Beast Boy now? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mr. T On: September 02, 2005 09:54 CDT
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The scene with the Emotions and Raven's 'Graphic Dreams' was hilarious. Can't wait to see what happens when Raven confronts Rage. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Frimm On: August 19, 2005 22:09 CDT
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coolio. i think you've got a great plot going here. one thing though...about raven's expressions. they must be connected to her in someways right? i mean, how else would she be able to feel emotions still. so that means that her counterparts should be able to sense raven whereever she goes, and feel what the original raven feels. so wouldn't they have come to help her when botanico attacked? anyways, if you have an answer, i'd love to hear it, owls@videotron.ca Frimmmmmm
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Reviewed By: Mr. T On: August 02, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is looking to be a great fic. I love BB/Rae, and I like the way you handle Raven's Emotions. Can't wait for you to update!
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Max927 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this Fic...ive always seen Rea and BB a certain good couple...u got hurry and let me read the rest.
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Reviewed By: JJ On: July 20, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this story despite the minor spelling errors. please update soon. and be sure to put in some descriptive lemons.
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Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, an interesting way of playing everything out btwn BB and Rae, although Raven has a LOT of emotions inside her head!! I'd get confussed! Anyways, great job and I'll be waiting for more!
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Title: THIS IS AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: sakayora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just one question for you... how do you know the color of the cloaks of the emotions? (I'm not talking about the three sisters tho...) Also... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC! Poor Raven... I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^_^ Please update!
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