| "Eyes Like Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this chapter was really good. i hope you write more chapters pretty soon. i don't want to rush you but it was so damn good. well i will write more reviews as the story goes on. This was another fine chapter. i bet the rest will be just as good. Well just to let you know my name is Nyah but people call me Honey or Tigger. you can call me whatever you want. Well hope to here from you soon. And please send me when you wrote another chapter if you can. well i have to go read more stories that r good but sometimes aren't like yours. And i am 15 female and i am from Louisiana. Well chat with you later. buh-bye. your friend, Nyah A*K*A Honey or Tigger
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: July 20, 2005 21:14 CDT
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I hope you get to post soon this is an interesting story this story is so I don't even have words to say what i want to say
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is franklin_honey90. i have read more chapters. i still think the story is really amazing. And yea i will email you sometime but my new name on yahoo is krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com .hopefully you get around to writing more chapters. please email me when you have written more chapters. i would love to read them. well i will write more reviews as the story goes on. and come of them will be pretty long but, i am sure you don't mind that at all. i love your story and i will read more and more chapters as you make them. and i will email you. and maybe i will make a story as good as yours. well til the mext review. buh-bye. p.s. If you ever have writers block you could email me i would love to help you write the story when you r out of ideas i will always have some.
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Title: Eyes Like Yours
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:24 CDT
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What a horrible place to leave us at:( If you can't draw, why not ask an artist to make the drawings for you? Youkai Yume is a great artist, and as far as I know, she's always drawing (because her stories aren't being updated very often....). Well, too bad you burn, I never do because I'm east indian so :P on you!!!!
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Reviewed By: die4InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very origanal and very funny. I hope i can see more of your stories and plz update soon!!
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Title: FF
Reviewed By: Gimpys still kicken On: July 12, 2005 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God I love this story it's awsom!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: franklin_honey90 On: July 08, 2005 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sorry to rush you but may you please add more chapters because this story is real amazing. Maybe one day you can make it into a book. And yes it is that good to put it in a book. Well I will be looking forward to read the other chapters in your story. I know it will come out very well. And maybe I can become as good as you. Well I would like to talk to you sometime. You can email me at franklin_honey1690@yahoo.com . I enjoy reading your story. And maybe we will become friends. Trust me I am not that way. Well that is all I have to say. I look forward to be reading your story.
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Title: Lol
Reviewed By: TiannaBannana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic its really funny yet cool, lol when u sai dthe ditzy blondes i was lik oh i feel so special lol jk but i am a natural blonde so my friends call me a dumb blonde :) well have fun on the trip and hope u update soon bye ~~~~ Tas
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Title: Eyes Like Yours
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 14:51 CDT
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If you ever make a fanart of this story, the shower scene is the one to draw! That was sweet:) Also, you shouldn't apologize for not updating. It's the summer break! It would be pretty sad if your life revolved around updating for a bunch of jerks with no lives. I hope you get an awesome tan while you're away(most people love tans, so I'm assuming you'll be tanning). Have fun!:P
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Title: Eyes Like Yours
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 20:27 CDT
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o.0! Did you make Sess a cashier? At the theatre?
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 17:57 CDT
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You should finish!! It's really good so far!!!!!
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Reviewed By: S. M. On: June 20, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only started reading Inuyasha a short time ago, and I rarely read fanfics. Yours is very good, and yes, I do think you should turn it into a full-length fic.
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Reviewed By: SOMEONE YOU DONT KNOW On: June 20, 2005 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FINISH IT I MEAN COME ON ITS REALLY GOOD AND YOU WONT FINISH IT(starts crying).YOU BETTER FINISH IT.YOU HERE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: June 20, 2005 17:44 CDT
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finish it, Finish It, YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT! 1) It has a great story line so far, it seems like it would be a good story and you should have a lot to work with. 2) I hate half finished stories. o, by the way, the last line was hysterical.
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Reviewed By: Kaye90 On: June 20, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i say,turn it into a full length story.theres very few fics i read,and i randomly choose this one...now i want more!this impressed me very much,even though it was just the intro.keep it up,i loved it.
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