| "Eyes Like Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: June 20, 2005 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
finish it, Finish It, YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT! 1) It has a great story line so far, it seems like it would be a good story and you should have a lot to work with. 2) I hate half finished stories. o, by the way, the last line was hysterical.
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Reviewed By: Kaye90 On: June 20, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i say,turn it into a full length story.theres very few fics i read,and i randomly choose this one...now i want more!this impressed me very much,even though it was just the intro.keep it up,i loved it.
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