| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: Me again!! ^.^
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: August 27, 2005 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D&L: HULLO! ^.^ Me again!! Daisuke: Hi! ^-^ D&L: Wait... Aha! *Goes out side and drags Satoshi* Come here you! X) Satoshi: *Is dragged in reluctently* Jeeze okay... >.< Daisuke: *Giggles lightly and nuzzles Satoshi's neck before nipping it softly* (Man I gotta write my own yaoi story sum day! >3) Come on,, dun be so grumpy! ^-^ Satoshi: Humph, *Smirks before switching roles with Daisuke, begins to nip Daisuke's neck hard* Heh... X) D&L: Ummmm, there's a room with a bed and with a drawer with lube in it for you! LOL! X) S&D: Thanks! *Goes into the room quickly* D&L: -_-;;;;;; Aw well... PLease get to the lemon soon!!!! X) Yummie. >3 Like them... *Points to the room where D&S are where moans are coming from* Heh... R&R EVERYONE AND NO FLAMES!!! Tis okay 'bout the spelling, I dun really care! ^-^ Just do your best! ^-^ GREAT JOB SO FAR!!!! COUNTINUE!!!! ^.^ Oh yeah, I agree with DBZ What if that actualy happened! LOL!!!! ^.^ Krad&Dark: HEY!!!! >.< D&L: Bye! THEY'RE GONNA KILL ME!! I''LL REVEIW IF THEY DUN KILL ME!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH RUN AWAY!!!!!!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! O.o
Reviewed By: Dark&Light On: August 24, 2005 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! O.o PLS COUNTINUE!! I wish that riku would die, but that is to cruel, even for a bitch........ >.< Wow, I LOVE this ficcie!!!! it's awesome!!! Get to the lemon, yum! X)
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Reviewed By: DBZVelena On: August 08, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, but it be funny as hell to have Dark and Krad kiss accedentally and then both go "euwwww" and wipe their mouths. Could you email me when you update? dbzvelena@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Ice_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! Keep writing, keep writing, leep writing! >_< Ack, *falls over..blinks* Um...heh...Keep writing, please? O.o I love it! ^.^ ...Ok, I'm a lil excited -_-
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Reviewed By: Azzy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! WRITE MORE! I LOVE THIS A LOT!!!! ~Azzy
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