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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 29, 2005 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good so far so please don't fuck it up! Also try to have sango have a good time with miroku beacause I hate when people don't LET THEM GET TOGETHER!!!!!!!! Great story.
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Reviewed By: SHADOW113 On: June 29, 2005 03:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW THIS IS A GREAT STORY... however, kagome should have been a little more shy of the sex and the marking... bed scene..12 out of 10 great. btw i know you are not finished with this. its got not ending. i see about 9 maybe 10 more chapters out of this. did i mention this is a great plot. perfect. idea for next lemon if so(to self: down boy, down, bad boy sit... ouch!!! (lol) have kagome be very possivide. and control inuyasha adds a balence in the relation ship..just my thought. finish the story now!!!!
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Reviewed By: coolis18 On: June 26, 2005 16:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
is your fic completed??? write more please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: June 26, 2005 09:30 EDT
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i have to agree with the others. it's a great fic, and the plot is really interesting. i hope you continue, because i think that now it will get really interesting!
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Reviewed By: Bratney On: June 26, 2005 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT YOU BEST UPDATE SOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: EnchantedLadyK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is now my new favorite story you better update asap ill die if you dont i want more i tell you more ill cry if dont give me more lol ok im crazy but no really this a great story im in love with it well nit technically but you get what i mean anyways keep up the great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: bk On: June 22, 2005 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story. I agree with the other reviews. This story is awesome. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep writing, I will be watching for updates. Thanks
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Reviewed By: just a fan On: June 22, 2005 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. every time i think i spot a plot hole you fill it plus your really funny.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I like it! Awesome story line, I love the characterization of Kagome and InuYasha so far and everyone else! Great lemon, too! I can't wait to see what happens next! the only sort of "critic" I have is on two or three words you spelt wrong you have "sweat" that's supposed to be "Sweet" and "meat" that's supposed to be "meet" and a new others in there, but it's no big deal! Great job! please update soon!
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