| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 23:45 CDT
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Hmmm, I didn't review the first few chapters, but it's about time that I did. I have to admit, I didn't care for the start of the story, only because it seemed too rushed and lacking in emotion. However, I am enjoying the idea you have, and I'm curious to see how this turns out. I feel like all your chapters are a little rushed, you don't have enough detail in them. But I am intrigued, and I want to read more to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Cactusflower On: March 01, 2006 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is Very rare that I will find a story like this that I will finish to the very end. I really enjoyed the little twist towards the end . Keep writing great stories and the path will take you along way to becoming great.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff sniff* waaah! that was an amazing story! i hate to see it end . . . but it just had to happen, didn't it?lol Maybe you could write a sequel to this . . . it'd be great to see something from you soon. I'll be with you the whole way! I promise! I'm too shy to write my own fic. . .i am such a wuss.lol But, hey, if i'm able to write a review, i should be able to write a story, right? RIGHT?!? Love the fic, & plz write a sequel!!!!! ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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Title: Sad to see it end
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story has been so awesome! I'm sad to see it end though.I've really enjoyed it all the way through. Please keep up the good work, it's been a pleasure being able to read this story, I look forward to reading your next fanfic.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 20:10 CST
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I have never read stuff like this it would be deeper but I not like that. okay so thanks for this last piece off the puzzle
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Reviewed By: Brittany125667 On: February 05, 2006 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no!It cant be over yet!!! Aw man... Cant wait to start reading that new story of yours... good job... and i hope its as good as this one was.
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Reviewed By: AK Inu Fan (not logged on) On: February 05, 2006 19:12 CST
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why? why? WHY??? But i don't wan't the story to end *pouts* oh well. well anywayz, REALLY awesome story! keep up with the good stories! ^.~
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor(not logged in, lol) On: February 05, 2006 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good ending! like how you ended it with the story, which was kinda the beginning, how she let all of her feelings out--least in my perception. ill make sure to read the new story, theres just something exciting about reading a story thats still being written. Thanks for a great story, i loved it!
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! YAY!! i LOVE IT!!! i say u make a sequil!! yo umade me soooooooo happy!! the highlight of my life is this story!!you made me laugh,and cry,... cry... and cry! i love it!
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Title: gods..
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: February 05, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved that so much! like you said, words on a screen cannot express the deep joy i feel for the characters in this story! *puts hands on hips* why didn't you thank ME in your epilogue? HMM? *laughs* just kidding. i was going to ask why you didn't use my titles for the story, but then i looked back at them, and they're all pretty bad. i must have been writing whatever came to mind. but aaaanyway... ok now that your story is finished, i might just get bored. it's a good thing you have another story comming! again, i loved your story, i hope to become as good a writer as you some time. De wa matane!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! Your story is awsome! I'm gonna ad you to my favorate auther list.I can't believe you finished it,your story is one of my greatest insperations.I'll read your other storys as long as you don't leave them hanging I promise! (longest review i've ever wrote,feel special) inuyashalover1221
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Title: AwWwW
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:28 CST
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AwWwWwWwWw...can't you make a sequel i mean COME ON!! a sequel would be awesome! am i right?! (loud cheers and applause) mm-hm! thought so! PLEASE! CAN"T THERE BE A SEQUEL?! PLEASE?! pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please?! with sugar on top!! ...PLEASE?! ...........aw, damnit! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?! ( crying and banging head on desk) ALL I , I MEAN, WE WANT IS A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean you are like the best author in the world so just for you viewers (except the complete bakas who gave you flames) MAKE A GOD DAMN SEQUEL!!!!! *_* p.s. you...are...so...friggin'...AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Is it really the end?!?! I was getting teary-eyed. I loved this story sooo much and I am glad that I went along the ride. There should be a small sequel to this story in my opinion, but that's just me. :-P I can't wait to read your newest story.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Is it really the end?!?! I was getting teary-eyed. I loved this story sooo much and I am glad that I went along the ride. There should be a small sequel to this story in my opinion, but that's just me. :-P I can't wait to read your newest story.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 18:53 CST
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wow, u're fast at looking at your reviews. i only posted that review today, and i got an e-mail saying that your fic was updated, so i looked at chapter 35. There was your reply to my review!!! I would never be able to do that for the life of me! lol update soon! I can't wait!! ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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