| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Desiree Dee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for fixing the review issue, though it still wont let me sign in for it! Any way it's rare that I review anything, but I felt it needed to be done in this case. The first thig that I have to compliment you on is your wonderful formatting and spelling skills. I don't know how many stories I come across where the summary is the only part that a person can read without getting a headache. I would also like to say that your story idea was nice, but the whole thing with the nuclear bomb was a bit much. All I'm saying is that it would have taken a lot longer and a lot more money than the prize money would have offered. You didn't say in your bio how old you were, but I'm betting that you're one of the people that has high marks when it came to English. Overall, two thumbs up, and a 9.5 in my book. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Title: AWSOME FANFIC!!! ^-^!
Reviewed By: Mad4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! Awsome Fanfic!!!!!! I love it soooooo much!!!!! *takes big breath* Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please *gasping for breath* please update ^.^! I think everything is good about your fic and I really want to find out what happens next!!!!! Ja ne!!!! -Mad4anime!!!! (LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!!!) *everyone starts to back away slowly.... (You: I think shes crazy!!! RUN!!!)*
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 20:01 CST
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The only complaint I have with this chapter--TOO SHORT!!! ARGH!!! I waited and waited, got going and it ended!!! ARGGHHHHH!!!! That's okay, though, at least you ARE updating ... unlike me.. I'm such a bad author. Anywho, great story, great plot, great angst, keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw snap!! Another dun dun dun moment and another cliffy that is going to keep all of us readers on edge! Don't keep us hanging too long.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. I\\\'ve was up till 7 in the morning last night and I just got up and read your last page. I love your story.It really does make you feel what kagome\\\'s feeling. I would love to know what happens next and I\\\'m definatly going to read this every time you update. You are doing a great job so don\\\'t quit on us any time soon!~*
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Title: OMG UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: tochi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 18:30 CDT
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omg!! u need to update!! if u dont, i will send my social studies teacher out to get u!! update update update!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your new chapter you wrote! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 19:39 CDT
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hey hey who told you to stop?! sorry i couldn't R&R i had lots of school work i am sick now i can barely speak well i loved your new chapter i hope you update soon keep up the good work
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Title: Cooly
Reviewed By: Inuyashasgirl8675309 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ireally like this story it seems ..... different and cool ....... but why hasnt Kaogme told INuyasha about ... FUEDUAL STYLE lol other then that it rocks!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOV THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON ITS GREAT
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 16:17 CDT
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your brought back that blasted jewel....why....Hasn't there been enough trouble coused by it......lol anyway thanks for updating. i liked this chapter.
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Title: Happy Birthday
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I wanted to say Happy 15th Birthday! Second off I wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your story, it is truly wonderful. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw snap!!! That's what I thought when I read the last line. :-P Another good chapter. Also, happy birthday! Mine is on Friday, I'll be 17. Plus, update soon, but not too soon!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your new chapter!! keep up the good work!! Thank you for reading my story!! can't wait for your new chapter!! ~Candie~
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NSI) On: October 04, 2005 17:10 CDT
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OOOO, that was very intersting. But I can't believe that she missed him! grrness Anyways, can't wait to see the next chappy!
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