| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 13:19 CDT
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Aw, I feel bad for Kagome. Another good chappy!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i really liked the new chapter you wrote! can't wait to read the new chapter! keep up the good writinh!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 19:39 CDT
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Hey this chapter is great. i still love this story alot and thanks for R&R my story well i hope you write more chapters real soon. i look forward to be reading more chapters. well Til the next review. Can't wait til more. oh and yea please email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks. oh and one more thing i added another chapter to my story. lata. by the way my name is Nyah. i am 15. and i spend most of my time on this website reading and reviewing lovely stories. bye now
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Reviewed By: inu -fan On: August 04, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story!update soon!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey me and my friend loved your story. i hope you write more chapters real soon. we'll be looking forward to reading the other chapters that you write. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes. thanks and i promise i will keep R&R
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(>.> hmmm....don't think i'm logged in....sorry ^.^) On: July 23, 2005 14:34 CDT
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^_^ sorry for taking so long to review...life was in the way. great chapter.. Yasha seems open but he has had a different childhood so differences are expected. ^_^ update when you get back and have fun on vaca.. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements*not logged in* On: July 19, 2005 19:29 CDT
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::looks miffed:: How dare you going to have us wait for the 20ish chapter to tell us whats going on!!!! LOL!!!! Anyways, its a shocker that InuYasha is being so compassionate towards Kagome since he didn't really do it openly before he was killed. Also, I can't wait for the next chapter as usual!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements *not logged in* On: July 18, 2005 19:24 CDT
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I am on vacation, and I am using my aunt's crappy, old laptop whenever I get the chance. That was a very interesting chapter and I am antsy to know what InuYasha,Miroku, and Sango are. Please continue!!!
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Title: damn-it
Reviewed By: lonely_soul On: July 16, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not sure wats going on but i can only read 9 of ur chappies...unless ur not done..hen thatd explain alot..but anyway i love it.its confusing which makes me bable 2 understand it~lol~ and inu-chan and kags are getting alone~for once~. pls e-mail me. yakoraseseni8@hotmail.com id love to hear what the hell is going on that i cant read the rest of ur story!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 13:07 CDT
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@_@ yes i can see what you mean about putiing it in there @_@ well you've started to have shippou be a part already. too bad it helped naraku >.> the b****** hmm, so sessy's intelegence has told him that kkagome needs to stop kuro.... hmm, interesting. update asap, i can't wait. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(*glances around suspisciously* not logged in...) On: July 11, 2005 20:09 CDT
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great chapter, and so enters the great tai-youkai. now what could he want. NEways about Shippou. Kagome and everyone could decide to do some community service(or they could be assigned it from school..had that happen to me before, wasn't that bad) and the could volunteer at an orphanage..then enter Shippou, the orphan of course ;) great chapter(didn't i already say that??) update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra :D
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (not logged in) On: July 11, 2005 15:24 CDT
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This story is getting soooooooooo good!!!! >_< Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(*yawn*...nope not logged in...you'd be used to it by now ^_^) On: July 07, 2005 21:03 CDT
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awsome chappy. so sweet, it's like their starting over in kagome's time. :D update asap, please....we just need shippou to join now. j ane, Zirra
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Title: YOUR STORY
Reviewed By: YASHAgrL1234 On: July 06, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! I love this I just know it's going to get better! I like to review at the end of a story b/c they change so i did wait and i loved it till the very end!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 15:39 CDT
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hmm what would i have said....."uh, um, I have no idea what your talking about." *glances anywhere but at InuYasha* :P yeah and that's worse than what kagome said. update asap, please this was an awsome chapter. ja ne, Zirra
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