| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: holey
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: December 30, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10!!! god, that was friggn awesome!!! i can't wait until you do MORE! you are SO talented!! my story isn't that good :P o well, you are awesome, i can't believe they're the same ppl, and that sesshy actually revived them, why did he do that, he should have been HAPPY that they were dead *confused8 anyway, why did sesshy keep his tokijin?(sp?) weird. KEEP IT UP! YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: kags1 On: December 30, 2005 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls udate soon
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Reviewed By: OMG D\dark hanyou5 On: December 30, 2005 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u so mucj for writing another chapter....when i saw it i freaked THANK U SO MUCH............................WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 30, 2005 00:46 CST
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oK IF THE BOMB AND THE BATTLE IN THE PAST WASN'T ENOUGH NOW THIS! Wow I wonder how it feels to have your meomery restored from 500 years ago. And Kagome throughtout the whole story she has had a internel conflict with herself about how Inuyasha in her time is not Inuyasha in the past. But now not only is he the same person but he just got his meomery restored and knows about his past life. He trust her that was so sweet. To have enough trust in somebody that you get hit with a sword. And even after having to explain that long and confusing story Sesshy didn't even bat a eye. He got skills. HAHAH! Kagome must have been mad because she yelled at Sesshy! And that takes nerve. Oh I didn't know I wrote soon much. Please write soon.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 00:45 CST
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Hey great chapter, I loved it right to the very end...lol..and can't wait for more, update soon!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: December 29, 2005 22:15 CST
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nice twist..too bad you love the cliffies so much >.< lol
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 22:09 CST
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YAY!!! NEW CHAPTER!! once again you brought tears to my eyes!! i'm glad InuYahsa's alive! but now i wonder what is ganna happen between kagome and InuYahsa... i cant wait! ^-^ UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 20:25 CST
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OMFG, this chapter made me almost cry! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Sutekiii!!
Reviewed By: amai_usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...MY...Godness!!! this is like my new favorite story...so many emotions..!! i woke up at 7:20 in the morning to read this..and i just finished...partl b/c my mom was bothering me.. IT IS SO GOOD!! i would've put 1 million in all of the things..but they didnt have it..--;;; so i put 10.XD anywayy keep writing..cause its an awsome story ;) cant wait for the next 2 chapters and happy holidays!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter!! keep up the good work!!! and plz update soon!!!!~Candie~
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements NSI On: December 22, 2005 16:16 CST
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That was an awesome update but GAH! Could you even leave such an evil cliffy. That's like the worst one you had up yet! ::pulls hair out and runs in a circle:: I must know what will happen!!!
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! cliffy! GAH! WHY?! UPADTE! I cant wait!! O_o i am going to go insane! i want... no NEED to know! i cant contain myself! I LOVE YOUR STORY! with a passion! you are a phonominal writer! just please tell me you wont abandon this story... i cant stand it when i read fic and you realy like it... and then after you complete reading the last chapter on it... the author has yet to complete it... you go to see when the author will or may be updating... and then you notice it was last updated in 2003! then all your hopes and dreams are shattered! ALL OF THEM! and then you ask God "WHY? ... why how could you!?" i mean really what kind of person is that heartless to just go and decide one day and say to themselves... 'hey! i'm wanna really piss some people off today so i m ganna randomly END my story!' Its like your happyness lies within that story... and yet... you will never konw what the HELL WOULD have happened! ...then you realise... They have DEPRIVED you of the ending which you crave to read! the soul purpose of living was to compleate that story! and thats when things get ugly... you start to think...'DAMN THEM DAMN THEM TO HELL! they did this on purpose! they wanted me to go insane! they wanted me to go on in life never knowing what was to come! its all a mind trick! ho ho! i figured them out! YES!! no longer will i endure this endless tourture!....' -_-; sorry got a wee bit carried away... yeah... anyways UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: i'm APPARENTLY not logged in! On: December 21, 2005 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGHHHHH!!!! I was sooo hoping to find out what they are! Oh well...*sigh* Totally amazing story, I absolutely love it to pieces. I told myself in class I was only going to read 2 chaps, and now look at me...CHAPTER 30!!! ;) Oh well, class sux anyway, and this was definately more interesting! Can't wait for an update~Sami
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 21, 2005 14:42 CST
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Finally we figure out what is going on here. I love how Sesshy always stays cool even in a very weird situation. AAAAAAHHHHHH! I feel bad for Kagome she loves him but feels like she is betraying Inuyasha #1 with the dog ears. Maybe after Sesshy explains thing her feelings will change.
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Kitten Meru On: December 21, 2005 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really the best chapter. dispite all the other great chappys, this one jumped out at me. i like the way you made opening report cards sound like the worst thing in the world, and like someone was going to die. lol, i've felt that way before! i am dying to know about inuyasha and such, so UPDATE!!!!!! you are so evil, why did you make such a mean cliffy :( :'(
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