| "The Mirror tells no Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so cool! Please Update soon, and those swords are cool, but wasn't Jet a traitor...huh! Sike!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: July 06, 2005 22:45 CDT
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sure it squashed some quesstions, but made other ones arise. I'm not gonna ask cuz I dont' wanna spoil it for myself. Update soon please. And I just recently saw the avatar episode to confirm my suspicions. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 16:41 CDT
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glad to see the bugs have been worked out. Impressive combining her energy with Yusukes. Even more inpressive, Kagome could contain it all. I look forward to reading more. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 15:23 CDT
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YAY!! But wait... *sigh* had to get an interuption when they were about to explain the whole separation thing, didnt ya? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:15 CDT
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yeah... kinda lost me at the end while explaining the whole Sesshoumaru & Genkai thing... so Fluffy & Genkai had a daughter. And their daughter had Nozomi, Kagome, Sango, & Souta? Ok, and Sesshy raised Nozomi. Their father raised Sango. & Their mother (sessh/gankai's daughter) raised Kagome & Souta. Did I get that all right? Hmm... brings lots of questions to mind like... Wheres Inu? Why were they raised seperately? and finally the ever popular question... WHAT ARE THE PAIRINGS??? lol UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 13:59 CDT
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I think I'm with Yusuke on being confused about the whole family thing but then I just woke up so that could be a large part of it lol Good chapter, I think MM deleted the spacing between paragraphs. It did that to me once on Absolute power, took me several tries before it uploaded it correctly and by then I was ready to pull my hair out. Good chapter, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kuramas gurl (nli) On: July 01, 2005 13:39 CDT
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The family stuff is confusing, but at least it's not as confusing as Geometry ^^ update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 11:18 CDT
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I had to ask my brother to be sure, but I know what swords you're talking about, you described them fine. good ficcy here. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 10:51 CDT
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update ASAP!!!! This is a great story, I hope to see the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 04:05 CDT
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YAY!! SOOOOO TOTALLY AWESOME!!! This is actually the first time Ive read anything like this. VERY clever! So... Kagome is the one in white, Sango is the one with maroon armor, and Nozomi in the dark purple armor? But whats with the silver highlights on Kag & Sango... if thats even them... I cant wait to read more. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 22:54 CDT
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When you first started to describe Nozomi, I thought it might have been Ayame because of the hair but 'tis okay. Over 20 eh? Post them if they are finished, or if you plan to update them. {Just please don't post a few chapters then discontinue them =/} No worries, I have no intention of keeping information and opinions to myself if I think it could help you in anyway. Ja ne ^.^
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:56 CDT
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very interesting story...you have my attention....great job and I can't wait until you update again...^-^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:12 CDT
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I'm guessing that the other two are Sango and Kagome since Shippou and Souta were mentioned. Looks like things are going to get interesting around the temple. Good chapter, hope you enjoy your vacation.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 10:01 CDT
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It is interesting, few minor spelling errors but nothing to really complain about. I'm curious as to who the triplets are. Are they established characters or OCs? I look forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Authoress ^.^ This is really good for your first posting, you didn't actually butcher all of the characters' names {Thank you for that!} and it doesn't have that burned-out feeling of using the same concepts over and over again like so many other fics. Please do continue. Ja ne ^.^
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