| "The Mirror tells no Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 04:05 CDT
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YAY!! SOOOOO TOTALLY AWESOME!!! This is actually the first time Ive read anything like this. VERY clever! So... Kagome is the one in white, Sango is the one with maroon armor, and Nozomi in the dark purple armor? But whats with the silver highlights on Kag & Sango... if thats even them... I cant wait to read more. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 22:54 CDT
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When you first started to describe Nozomi, I thought it might have been Ayame because of the hair but 'tis okay. Over 20 eh? Post them if they are finished, or if you plan to update them. {Just please don't post a few chapters then discontinue them =/} No worries, I have no intention of keeping information and opinions to myself if I think it could help you in anyway. Ja ne ^.^
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:56 CDT
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very interesting story...you have my attention....great job and I can't wait until you update again...^-^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:12 CDT
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I'm guessing that the other two are Sango and Kagome since Shippou and Souta were mentioned. Looks like things are going to get interesting around the temple. Good chapter, hope you enjoy your vacation.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 10:01 CDT
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It is interesting, few minor spelling errors but nothing to really complain about. I'm curious as to who the triplets are. Are they established characters or OCs? I look forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Authoress ^.^ This is really good for your first posting, you didn't actually butcher all of the characters' names {Thank you for that!} and it doesn't have that burned-out feeling of using the same concepts over and over again like so many other fics. Please do continue. Ja ne ^.^
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