| "A Lesson to Be Learned...PART 1!" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 02:36 CDT
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yes pllllz continue!! plz~??
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH ....MY.....GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!That was fircken hillarious!!!!!!!!!!*I know I can't spell.)
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the funniest thing i've ever read and thanks for makeing a point of the same plot and god please do more short funny stories like you just did thanx
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was funny and entertaining.
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Title: Holy
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprized I am still on my chair! I hate sesh/kag so reading your version of them was just to great! keep up that humor of yours and i hope to see more of it
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Title: Best story ever!
Reviewed By: Inuchan182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire time I was reading I was laughing my butt off! Especially since I have read/seen WAY TO MANY stories that were written alomst exactly like that and with almost exactly the same plot. I love that fact that your dissing thoes pieces of cyber crap (stories your making fun of) I just wish I had thought to do something like this....
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I laughed so hard, I literally secreted ocular liquids. ((that means tears you sick fucks)) lol :) THAT is exactly how lemons seem to me as well, more often than not. I'm pretty sure mine are awful enough to fall into that category. LOL. The best pickup line I've ever used was "Nice Shoes, wanna fuck?"... It gets the person to laugh, and sometimes you get lucky :p
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Title: blah blah blah Baka blah
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so damn funny I could have embarrassed my self if it wasn\\\'t in the middle of the night...I hope you write some more parody cause the fandom is full of regurgitated plot lines...and spelling errors Ja Aleaha *still laughing* Sisson
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 15:52 CDT
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That made absolutely no sense to me, but okay... You had fun, I can tell, and that's all that matters...
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: Inubabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i loved it. I was laughing by like the second line. It was so true. I hate the stupid fics where the author doesnt develope much of a plot or reason for ppl to do 'it'. And it seems the Sess/kag ones are the most dominant i've found. I loved your story...Do more if possible. ~~Inubabe
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Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I agree, I definitely dislike all the - Inu/Kik = Sess/Kag + horrible lemon = annoying plot - fics like that. It has just gotten to be ridiculous. At first, when I read the summary if your post, I felt that it was unnecessary, just because it can't change a thing, but then I read it. I still feel like that, but it *really* made me laugh. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 03:29 CDT
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lol thats was so FUNNY! Kagome sees them and shes like 'uh! why cant he fuck me like that!!' then sesshomaru is like "Kagome i love you! Lets fuck!" "ok!" "i love you, you worthless filthy human but im going to have to hurt you" "ok!" LOL I ALMOST FELL OVER
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Reviewed By: Imalazymystic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was certainly... different. Although some have said that the grammar and flow needed work... i think from reading the first paragraph or so that if you really sat down and *wanted* to write a serious story you could... but who wants that? I personally am a fan of just about anything as long as the writer can pull it off so that I\\\\\\\'m not laughing halfway through the first page,and I have seen a fair share of *decent* (note, i didnt say good) Sess/kag pairings. I found your one-shot to be very amusing, and really did bring out how most writers just want to get down to \\\\\\\"it\\\\\\\" and not develop any sort of plot. Very funny, and yea... whoever flamed you does need to read summaries a bit more closely before clicking the link to actually read the posted story. On that thought... ever notice the rising abundance of \\\\\\\"heat\\\\\\\" fics? Like the only way Inu and Kagome are going to get together is if the poor hanyou is attacked by some horrid overload of hormones? ah well... im rambling now... its 3am (why am I up?) To summarize and put it bluntly: You do good, have good day. Bye!
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Title: question
Reviewed By: midnight1212 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would u really laugh?.... anyways love it and keep up the good work
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:04 CDT
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Ok, I A) Unsually don't review one-shots because I'm a lazy SOB and B) Usually don't read Sess/Kag anything, because, well...it just, no matter how prolific the author, does not follow anything set out in the canon characterizations without totally neglecting the anime/manga creations. But your summary hooked me and I read. I completely understand the humor (even if others did not) and, for the "flamer" who insulted you and told you to keep your opinion to yourself- you DID specify that it was a parady, very clearly. Aren't they the idiots for reading, knowing full-well that you were making fun of the "illustrious" genre they so obviously adore. Bah. True, grammar and spelling and flow could have been more developed, but that was part of the charm, the "shock" value, if you will. Wham, Bam, thank you M'am, Ne?
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