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Reviewed By: keleos On: May 11, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! So much angst!! I love this story!! I really hope Sesshy dear can find Rin and "tell" her how he feels before it's too late *wink*... Awesome ff, you're amazing! Please write another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is really beautiful. It's nice to see how much effort and pride you put into this. That was definitely a painful chapter. So much heartbreak, rejection, longing...I really enjoy this story and look forward to future updates. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to kow how it ends!! =( So post the next chapter asap please!! =)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great awww but Sesshy is already mated. how will those two ever get together? * starts bawling* such a beautiful story!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 09:51 CST
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oh yea, this fic has mad me cry. several times i might add. this just shows how much substance it has!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. this fic is..by far the *best* inuyasha fic i've read in a very long time! seriously. the writing, the plot, the essence and style of the whole thing is really fantastic! the lemon wasn't too cheesy, and you depict all the situations, their emotions and thoughts extremely well and in character. one request though; um well... could you..well, not have Rin go with that headman? in any way. i don't really like him. even in the anime.haha. but of course, it's your fanfiction. :) i can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really enjoyed how much more is there to go? I love the way that you've done Rin she is still the same but subtle different from what many others create her as. Fantastic work. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Cla8012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 11:32 CDT
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Wow, great story. The characters have such an emotional depth that you've captured perfectly. Please update soon, this is really a great fanfic and I'm dying to know what happens. It's so unfair that Rin has endured such torture and horor for Sesshy and he thinks he's been betrayed...*sigh* Good job!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn the suspense, I can't believe you ended the chapter like that I could've cried. The story is excellent and intriguing. I'm anxious to find out how Rin will ever get that stubborn, hard-headed dolt of a master to listen that she's innocent. So hard to be so close to happiness and have it snatched from you every time. Update Soon(like today, **smile**) Smooches
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: melf On: September 28, 2006 22:20 CDT
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amazing i love your story!!!! please this time you have to update quick!!!! please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Nahau On: September 28, 2006 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic, and have been waiting for you to update for a long time now. I want to know what will happen with Kane. And I especially want to find out what happens between Rin and Sesshoumaru. Oh, and what happens with Sesshoumaru and Kasumi. Please update soon! I promise to be a good girl if you do. .> Ok...maybe not, but update anyway.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Crap! That is one intense fiction. Oh the pain and angst is killing me. They've really been given a second chance. The things poor Rin had to endure. Wow, I don't know who is in worse condition. Given Sesshoumaru feels betrayed, but to live as Rin had only to have to face accusation of betrayal after all she's endured, kami! Fantastic writing, I'm completely taken with the story and I really look forward to your updates. Thanks much!
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Title: SOOOOO AWESOME
Reviewed By: poodow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 13:54 CDT
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Just when I gave up on most of my favorite stories ever updating again- A surprise! Can't wait to read more... love the originality mixed in with the true nature of the characters/manga (I am guessing you have seen chapters 470-471 of the manga- it's about time we saw some "emotion" from Sessh for Rin- HOORAY) thanks a bunch!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 20:40 CDT
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*Pulse* at the end of the chapter. He is going to be able to revive her. Hope you are still working on it.
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. Just kill me, i am so depressed right now. wow, ive cried more during this story than...anything. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. i'm going insane, i need to know wheather he'll be able to revive her or just be a depressed sesshoumaru for the rest of his life, a shadow of his former self etc., etc.
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