| "One Life" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:09 CDT
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o man please update. i love this story and i want to know wut happens next!
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 20:45 CDT
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Excellent!! The story has a great plot. The characters, especially Rin, are well developed. You've entwined emotion to a usally serious Seshy. I really like that he's still in character, but with some warmth. Ofcourse, Rin is out of character, however, she have aged maturely and beautifully. You've provided explicit sex without the smut. I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic and will submit another review after its been completed. I'm anxiously awaiting the rest.
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 22:24 CDT
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ok write another chapter already...i feel that i have waited long enough
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Reviewed By: WhiteLight On: October 04, 2005 22:51 CDT
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This story deserves to be nominated but someone already beat me to it!!! Good Luck cause this story so deserves recognition plus i think your an awesome writer :>. I particulary likedthey way you've potrayed Rin (sometimes they make her sound stupid, ignorant and simple but you've gotten away from that trap and now she is a bit more kick ass). Anyway keep up the most excellent work and a final goodluck for the awards!
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Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: October 01, 2005 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the better R/S stories that I have read!!! You have great characterization! Sooo much angst!! AHHH. Please up date. i need to know what is going on. Who is this demon?! You've really got me with this one.
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Reviewed By: KCgirl On: September 26, 2005 06:36 CDT
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I just found your story and I love it!! Please continue writing it!
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 15:11 CDT
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;-; please update soon, this is one of my absolute favorite stories....-sniffles- Its sad to see no updates. =(
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Title: What happens?
Reviewed By: LIL PINKETTE On: September 15, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!! I'm writing my own too and I just wanna let you know that ADD MORE CHAPTERS!! I was crying at the last chapter PLZ PLZ write a happy ending!!! Love your story still
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I love your FIC!! please update soon I so wanna see whats gunna happen next! I hope Sess gets over himself and ends up with Rin. This is such a cute story! I havent seen many sess/rin fics. two thumbs way way up!
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Reviewed By: Inutrasha On: September 13, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you said no one is reviewing, well here comes the calvary! i think this is a pretty good story, the perfect blend of blood and sex. i cant wait to see what happens next. don't stop writing, i think this is a great story i love the way you capture sesshy ( i love rin and sess pairs), i will be a constant reviwer if it means you keep writing. good luk and stay original! 'Trasha
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:32 CDT
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awesome!!! finally... what will they do and man exciting
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Reviewed By: Krysss On: September 13, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I've been a silent reader of this fic but after this I just had to tell you that, this fic is excellent and YOU are so good. I hope the next chapter comes out soon and this cliff hanger is kinda mean and needs to rectified. Suspense is bad for the heart...lol...so please hurry. Thanks.
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Title: ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not signed in On: September 13, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just when everything was getting good they get interrupted. anyway that was awsome i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Brittster On: September 13, 2005 09:03 CDT
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holy crap! that was awesome!
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Title: Yes death is sweet
Reviewed By: BabycakesRobin On: September 13, 2005 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr You are the Death of me I will die cause you bring me sooo high and then plush me down I have been reading thie over and over AHHHHHH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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