| "Bath Time" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: have a great day On: July 27, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write the next story
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Reviewed By: plapla On: July 27, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was sweet. i love vegeta's protrayal. bulma was sweet too.
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Title: CUTE
Reviewed By: Hitakrui On: July 27, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the cutest thing i ever read please write the next story
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Title: Lydia
Reviewed By: Lydia On: July 13, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic and yes you should write a squel.....definitive
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy (not logged in) On: July 06, 2005 10:17 CDT
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I loved it! :) Love this sort of story that shows Vegeta's soft side towards his family. And that part Trunk's crying because "he wants Papa" and Vegeta says "Tell him Papa's dead"... LOL! That's soooo like Vegeta! Is it one-shot or there's more? If yes, can't wait to see the rest.
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Reviewed By: Ozzy4Prez666 On: July 05, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. You should DEFINATELY do a sequel! Cute and funny, I love it.
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Title: Bath Time
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so cute..Yes to sequel
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 30, 2005 12:42 CDT
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aww that is so cute.... I loved it...
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Title: AWW to cute
Reviewed By: harmony23 On: June 29, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes please do a sequal.....this was jus too cute. I liked it very much!!
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Title: Aww..
Reviewed By: DBZFan On: June 29, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... this is so cute! Please write the sequel!
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Title: Bath Time
Reviewed By: MLF aka maccam On: June 29, 2005 05:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
AW that was so sweet. ^^. If you want to write a sequel than you should...
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Title: Aww..
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... this is so cute! Please write the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Jeanna On: June 28, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute do the sequel .
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: June 28, 2005 14:02 CDT
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I sequel would be great. I thought this was a lovely little piece though as a mother of a three year old, I thought Trunks's speech was a little too good (I know people try to say "but he's the son of a genius"...even Einstein didn'g speak till he was 4). Anyway, most two year olds do speak in sentences (though limited to a 4 word max) and even with that can be hard to understand...even for the best speakers. Most toddlers don't use "but" and other such words. So I think you just need to take your time to think out the dialogue for younger characters better. Otherwise, this was a great little one-shot.
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Reviewed By: Trisha_ On: June 28, 2005 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i agree, that was so cute ^^ i love it. yup, you should do a sequel with Bra. oh she's just the cutest thing, and daddy's lil princess.
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