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Title: P.s
Reviewed By: HieiIsMineToGlomp07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S. If you make this a romance please either do a Kurama/Kagome or a Hiei/Kagome. Perferably a Hiei/Kagome I love that pairing
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: HieiIsMineToGlomp07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful it is such a ten. I love the plot so far and the Kagome and Souta bonding thing. I love the way she acts and how close they are. Hell I just love everything about this fic. PLEASE update soon.
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Title: chap 4
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Title: What a crossover should be
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: September 16, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be this single, most original IY/YYH crossover I have *ever* read. There's obvious thought and careful planning hidden in the mysteries of this plot. It's not the same 'protect the shikon protector' idea rehashed - really, I'm amazing at the originality of this story. It's engrossing, as well, with vivid description, smooth structure, and mystery unique enough to pique my interest even if I wasn't familiar with the animes. This fic is very impressive. I'm eager to read more!
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I'm pretty sure you lost your first chapter. Just wanted to let you know.
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Reviewed By: Katzztar not signed in On: September 02, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank for the adding the fact that Kuwabara's nearnessto the Bosozokuu. I've used info I've found on the bosozoku to influence my stories of Kuwabra's involvement in street gangs but I've not seen anyone else use the Bosozoku in any way. Normally there are only mentions to street gangs, rarely are there any focus on the effect of being in a gang, and almost never is Bosozuko mentioned. Even if it was mention in only passing about the effects of Kuwabara being involved in gangs, it still did did good to show how that aspect affects him. Nearly everyone, it seems, to forget the comment that Kuwabara made back in Genkai's tournament, "I've been fighting all my life." That line tells us that he's been in the streets long before his teen years. I like the fact that Souta likes Kuwabara but not Kurama. If romance is added to this please do NOT make it Kagome/Kurama, there are way too many of those. Too many of Kag/Hiei and Kag/Yusuke too. I've only seen one Kazuma/Kagome. But that only IF romance is added... Ahhh what am I saying? All IY/YYH involve romance, I've not seen one yet that was not romance.
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Reviewed By: Saru On: September 02, 2005 18:39 CDT
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likey-likey-likey!!!!! Saru and the others you must update for, yes-yes!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 02, 2005 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool.
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Title: FF.NET
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 11:07 CDT
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I published this story on ff.net- it gets updated more because I only put the really well edited chapters up here- so if you would like to read it go there (I have the same name) I have nine chapters up there. ENJOY!
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Reviewed By: chryblosom On: July 27, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your storys really good. I liked how you didnt make Kuwabara an idiot like most people. You made him seem like a better character to me xD It's an interesting story i cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very original idea. I like the mystery that is going on and I love that you have Kuwabara in it as much as Kurama. That you for not making Kuwabara an idiot.
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Reviewed By: LadyAmamizu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story i cnt wait till you update... this is a Kuram/kagome story right?
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very intriguing story...not many stories catch my attention just by their summary...great job and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 30, 2005 10:18 CDT
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most interesting.... I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 20:14 CDT
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Your story is oretty good...but it kinda' got confusing. but its got a very good and unique plot-line. Please Update soom.
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